Book:

Eternally Unheard by bangtanrewinds

Reviewer: Tiya Definitelyactor

Title:
Perfect title, Goes Perfectly with the plot. Intriguing and interesting. Something that isn't commonly used and is unique and original in your own way.

Cover:
Aesthetically pleasing, Though I'd say the filters used (If any) should be toned down a little bit and the blue used to also be toned down a bit.

Blurb:
Very intriguing and interesting, Not a single punctuation mark used wrong. Ending with a question is great for attracting Readers. The concept was well executed but it does reveal a little too much about the plot giving crucial information.

Hook:
A poor hook in this case, In terms of hook I mean the first paragraphs that lead you to read the rest of the chapter. Though it's an interesting hook, It's weak and lacks the effect it needs to get others to continue reading on.

Grammar & Spelling:
Spelling is on point, Not a word or typo missing.

Punctuation is on point, Not a comma or period out of place but I do add diversity into your Punctuation marks. Repetitions of where a comma could be used instead of using a period would give the story more depth instead of an abrupt ending to each long sentence.

A Lot of things that turn readers off is Grammar, In this case I would say you do have the basics of it down you lack in a dream areas which do really turn readers off. I'd recommend revising your book once more and finding the various grammatical errors.

Plot:
Very interesting indeed, From where I've read (The first 10 chapters) I can confidently say it's a very heartwrenching but lovely plot. With the different letters written to his lover. The flow between them were perfect and the emotion was captured Perfectly.

Writing Style:
A very interesting writing style indeed, One I haven't encountered before. You write as if you're addressing an audience or your readers as they can respond to you having a  friendly conversation. Not a standard recommended way to write as most people, myself included, might get confused but after reading and analysing more you do get used to it.

Enjoyment 
I did really enjoy it both the angst and heartwarming stuff. Very humourous at times but very sad. Something I ahvent found in a while.

Extra:

First Chapter
A great short chapter, With a few grammatical errors here and there. The hook I would say is weak doesn't have to immediately hook the reader but keep them entertained enough to continue reading. The beginning was perfect but slow, And the pace seems to pick up with the short chapters. Slowing down the pace would help readers connect with the characters more than rushing through it each chapter. But a very suitable ending with a good amount of suspense to carry readers to the next chapters...

Pacing
Though it's a short story, The pacing is at a moderate speed. Nothing to add but I would recommend slowing down the pace a bit . Even though it is a short story, Slowing down the pace would help the readers to connect to the characters better.

Sub-plots
Now, Though the plot is very interesting yes I do think some sub plots can be added though I don't think it's needed. Though it drags a little bit adding sub plots could slow down the pace even more but give greater depth into the story. It would be great to see how these sub plots would be incorporated with the various letters he writes and all the rest. Adding one nessecary to the plot would be even better but I overally do think you shouldn't put in sub plots.

Reviewed by DefinitelyActor