Rainbow's pov
"hey rainbow." I heard a voice behind me. "oh hey smudge how are you." I asked. "I'm fine just sad that's all." He said. "how come." I asked. "well there was another cat here before you but he left to join a clan and I haven't seen him in a long time and I know you have having dreams like him right." He said. "yeah I have." I said. "are you planning on leaving and finding a clan I know that you'll be a great warrior with your speed and your powers and you can clan,down any cat If you put your mind to it by singing." Smudge said. "thanks smudge that's what I,was gonna do we'll I better get going goodbye smudge." I said. "goodbye rainbow." He said. I then jumped down from my fence and ran,all the towards the setting sun while singing I saw mountains infront of me and I ran all the way through them and went to the place where they gather and caught something for each clan here they come I there down each piece of prey infront of the clans and they looked up and tried to find me but I was already down and coming around the tree when they saw me they we're shocked to see,a cat with a rainbow colored pelt. "Who,are you and what do you want." Said a white tom with black paws who I knew as Blackstar. "I'm rainbow and I like to join one of your clans." I said clamly. The there other clans didn't want me no surprise there I knew witch clan would accept me then the gathering was over and I went with thunderclan and when every one saw me the marveled at my rainbow pelt. Then firestar bounded up the highrock but before he could get all they way up their was a noise and everyone looked up and saw,something heading straight for firestar I ran forward and lunched myself at the creature and chased it away and everyone knew I didn't need to be trained so firestar said" I firestar leader of thunder clan call upon my warrior ansesters this cat she has learned your noble code and we welcome her as a full warrior rainbow do you promise to uphold the warrior code as long as you live." "I do." I spoke with confidence. "then by the power infested within me I give you your warrior name rainbow from this day one you shall be known as rainbowfur for you bravery and courage. Firestar said. I then licked his shoulder and accepted the calls of the clan now rainbowfur as the newer warrior you need to have a slient vigil until dawn so that's what I did.
So how is the first part tell me what you think until next time my cutiefazcubs byeeeeeeee.