GUYS OMGS I JUST MADE SUCH A NICE COVER I MEAN I AM IN LOVE WITH IT

it took some time (a long while) but I still think it came out great. What do you think? 
Also, constructive criticism is appreciated!!!! I want to improve so some tips and criticism will be appreciated.

Also, If you guys want anything like this, or this exactly, I have an image without the heading so you can order it

Which one do you like better?