Hello guys
What do you think alya is a positive character or negetive ???

What do you think will manik trust alya?

Will Manik tell Nandani his past??

Will they be safe???

Girl: sorry Basu dadi, next time dhayan rakhugi

Badi dadi: tumhe kuch nhi ho payega, main hi kar lungi. Iss Nandani  ko raste se hatana pdega. Ab toh Manik ko Hun Nandani ke khilaf nhi bharka sakte

Girl : Nandani ki aap fikar mat karie ( smriking)

Badi dadi: matlab (confused)

Girl: ye dekhiye ( giving her a paper)

Badi dadi: aree Wahh, yeh toh khud hi mere raste we jaa rhi h. Ab bas manik aur raj nyonika ka kuch karna h

Girl: dadi mera hissa mat bhulna

Badi dadi: ha ha

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Ma: Nandani please this time trust me. Let's go from here

Na: kyu kru main tumhe trust. I don't trust you manik Malhotra

Ma: Nandani please we will fight some other time ( irritated)your life is in danger

Na: you are lying. Why will someone kill me.?( furiously )

Ma: nan( stopped in his track, with shocked face look at her bacl)( his eyes widen) Nandani!!!!!!!!!!( shouting)

Next part will have the revelation. Excited??

I know guys last part was a little childish. The way manik talked to alya and they are talking properly but it was necessary for upcoming updates.

Nd this is my first time to write such a intense story. So please forgave my mistake and suggest me please. I will try to improve my skills in next update.

Nd next update will be super long.

Thank you guys
Love you all