I haven't had many reviews, so here are some comments from my current story, A New Generation of Pan.

rosaimee: "I like how the story is developing! The way you portrait the characters is awesome! Nice descriptions."

Victoria_Brooks: "I like your use of descriptive words, especially about Hook! I can picture him in my mind. :)"

madame_bootsie: "I'm going to like this story!The girls are both so adorable and the fact they are American is definitely a twist for a Peter Pan story! I wonder why that man thinks she's Wendy....? :O So glad you wrote this! I looove Peter Pan! Beautiful start, Anna! :D ♥♥♥and I think the same thing sometimes when I make my characters say a somewhat offensive remark! Don't worry, I definitely think everyone will know her opinion!"

JessicaBFry: "Not to worry, Anna. Hopefully readers don't take offense, but readers shouldn't assume that a character's beliefs or statements automatically coincide with the author's. :D Well started here. Peter Pan is one of my favorite stories too."

There are I think a few more, but here ya go!

(Thank all of you guys mentioned above for commenting and reading A New Gen.! You guys are amazing!)

-Anna