Title: The Rescue of Summerfall

Author: Troublesome_Wench

Summary:

Sylfir, a young bounty hunter and druid from the High Forest, takes on a routine mission to help the village of Summerfall. However, upon arrival, she discovers the village has been ravaged by an unknown beast and now harbors powerful and conflicting forces: a devoted cleric, a trio of formidable Uthgardt warriors, and a dangerous red-eyed witch. As Sylfir works to unite these individuals, she finds herself emotionally drawn to the villagers, particularly the charming son of a farmer. Torn between her duty and her growing feelings, she must navigate the chaos and ensure good triumphs over evil.

Here is my review for this story.

Strength:

You have a very good way of presenting your story, I find it easy to read, considering also for non fantasy fans, they could easily understand the story.

Very good main character introduction.

A chapter dedicated to new characters gives a good spacing and introduction for each of them.

The story has a very good pacing, (from my point of view). It was delivered with a nice flow of character introductions, environment and action scenes.

For Improvement:

I have no issues with the story, writing style, or pacing.

A little tip here, every time you use an abbreviation or any jargon words for the first time, that belong or part of this world building of your story, make sure to add a little description or what is it all about. (Ex. name of a food, place, item, spell, etc.)

Conclusion:

The story was such a breeze to read, I have read only the first few chapters, and the simplicity of delivery was enough for me to hold on to the story.

The right pacing gives enough space to introduce new characters and possible events that would lead to the adventure of Sylfir.

it is important to draw your readers attention to this early part of the story, if they find it lacking objective or what the story is about, then they might lose interest and leave.

Overall, I find your story worth reading and entertaining as well.

I hope you get more readers to enjoy this story, I will continue to read in silence after this review.