Title: A Slave for the Alpha King

Author: WolfeBayne

Summary: 

Aliyah is forced to work for the powerful Connor werewolf clan, but despite her lack of choice, she vows to escape and pursue her dreams, only to have her life upended when Brayden Connor, the future alpha, compels her to become his mate. This is my review for this story (covering Chapters 1-6).

Strength

The first thing that I noticed is the consistency of the writing, It was from a 1st person point of view, and it was all about Aliyah, her thoughts, her ideas, and what she felt. This is a common way to keep your readers interested and invested in the character, eventually in the story itself.

Like what I have mentioned to the comment, I felt like reading an actual book already, the pacing was just right.

For Improvement

The wolf fantasy genre is a common choice among mythical creatures, alongside others like vampires and mermaids. To avoid similarities with existing stories, you need to put in extra effort to make your story unique or outstanding. To achieve this, it's essential to be familiar with other werewolf/alpha stories and understand how they've been presented.

Conclusion:

I'm not a big fan of werewolves or vampires, but I do appreciate them. However, this story felt more like Aliyah's story within the pack, rather than the other way around, which I enjoyed since I prefer character-driven stories.

As for your writing style, you seem to know what you're doing. The chapters appear to be thoroughly revised and checked for quality and accuracy (at least, I hope that's the case).

Good luck with your story and keep writing.