Title: A Ballad of Falling Light

Author: XxFaylinexX 

Summary:

In a world ravaged by elemental powers, the Phoinixian army's relentless advance has scorched two nations and threatens more. As the Republic of Fire burns its path through the land, Siraj takes matters into his own hands with a risky plan to assassinate the Phoinixian centurion. Meanwhile, other forces—each from the duarchy of Water, the monarchy of Earth, the federation of Wind, the kingdom of Light, and the clan of Shadow—are also maneuvering to alter the world's fate. Their intertwined destinies could either save or doom their fractured world.

6 different nations involved in the story

Phoinix - The republic of fire

Nerinea - The duarchy of water

Gizoa - The monarchy of earth

Ventus - The federation of wind

Phaos - The kingdom of light

Schaduw - The clan of shadow

Strength:

From my perspective(you might find this a little bias), the strength of this story lies in its richly detailed scenes and the captivating introductions to each nation. The vivid descriptions and engaging narrative make each setting come alive, enhancing the overall experience. As for the plot itself, it immerses the reader in a fantastical world with the authenticity and depth of a true fantasy novel. I couldn't ask for more from this story.

For Improvement:

While I have no issues with the story, writing style, or pacing etc., I do have a personal suggestion for enhancing your story/book. Adding occasional images or visual aids within the text could significantly enrich the reader's experience. Just as the individual nation introduction's part was vividly engaging, random illustrations inserted throughout the narrative could help readers better visualize and immerse themselves in the scenes. Adding these visual elements could further bring your story to life and deepen the reader's connection to the world you've created.

Conclusion:

I became an instant fan of your story, captivated by the vivid detail and immersive world-building that makes each scene and nation come to life. Your storytelling has the authentic depth of a true fantasy novel, drawing readers into a richly imagined world. While I suggest considering the addition of visual aids to enhance the reader's experience further, I still admire it even without the images(hmm I hope I make sense to what I just said ^^v ). This is the end of my review for your story, but I will continue to read it silently (though I do leave comments or reactions).

I am not sure if this story has already been published as a physical book, but I do hope this becomes one.

More reads for your story XxFaylinexX

~aftermat