Written by @mjt103

In this short little book, you take a trip to view the real stories of the three other Potter sibling, Charlus, Rowena, and Anna Potter.

Now, to rack up points:

+20 points for doing a bit of an original twist on a kinda cliche plot

-2 points for a couple capitalization mistakes

+30 points for discriptions

Some points though,

-When I was reading the part of Rowena, I noticed you had quite a few song lyrics in there. People don't actually read them, just get annoyed when they have to flip through. I learned this from experience. Describe her adoptive father singing to her, instead of copying down the lyrics.

-I am going to have to take some points off because I've seen a lot of stories where Harry has a brother or a sister, but never three siblings. So it is different but the base plot is overused.

90/100