Author: Piper5

I'd just like to point out, I only read the first three chapters :)

Cover 6/10

Your cover is pretty, but you should put the title of the book on it, and maybe spice it up just a bit, but not bad!

Description 10/10

Your description is perfect honestly. No complaints!!

Plot 8/10

From what I've read so far, the plot is good, just a little slow at first, but that's not a big deal at all.

Characters 9/10

Stiles is very in-character, you write him very well! Especially what he'd be like if he was bitten. Scott, on the other hand is a bit out of character not too much, but just a little. I don't know if I see him giving Stiles the bite, even if he were afraid of losing him because Scott is a very selfless person.

Grammar 9/10

I only saw a few minor errors, nothing too major. Maybe read through it again though if you wanna make sure you catch them all, or have a friend read through it.

Extra Advice/Thoughts

It's a very good fic from what I've read, you're a talented writer!

Overall 42/50 If you have any questions please ask!