Well, Writer431 has a Naruto fanfiction for me to review and she (or he) wants be the review it with stone cold killer so hERE WE GO Y'ALL

Y'all for requests I'm gonna add "Humor" as an option where I'll try to be as light hearted and like... idk humorous? I'm suck but like I'll attempt. If y'all wanna change your request just go back to the first chapter and like, respond to your own comment saying you wanna change it sksksk-

So in Wings of Despair, Obito is apparently back, but not in the correct time line. 

So I plunge into chapter one, as per the usual, and it's so good henken henk? The grammar is good, you've got commas, punctuation, your paragraphs are the right length. It's also very interesting, Obito waking up after the war. He feels he doesn't deserve his eyes, he doesn't really know what's going on, but he knows anyone other than him deserved this more.

I'm a sucker for time travel so you've basically already won me over to be honest. You could be putting periods in the place of question marks and I probably wouldn't notice.

(But since I mention it, your punctuation is stellar-)

BRUH HE'S IN SASUKE'S BODY I'M TRIPPIN WTF THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER Y'ALL GOTTA READ THIS SK

Good grammar, unique idea. Your fanfiction is great. 

OH SHIT IT GETS BETTER SKSKSK

Please excuse me this has turned from a fanfiction review to just plain fangirling over your grammar and plot hahdhldks

Okay they actually asked me to review their other one too so I'll put it in here. Your first one was amazing, good grammar and plot. It's really good! You've got a good story idea, and good progress in the story. 

To Be Reborn

This is also a Naruto fanfiction and also stone cold killer. In this one, it's also time travel (fuck yeah here we go) and from the looks of this dun diddly description here, we're looking at Madara being reborn! So yeetus that fetus, y'all.

LMAO MIKOTO HIS MOM AND HE A GIRL

A+ for uniqueness. I've obviously seen stories where Madara is reborn as a girl, but I've never really read them. Just spotted them around. So I'm just going to say it's unique and call it a day! You've got good structure in your paragraphs. Again, the grammar is spot on.

Madara is so mean oh my GoD. Poor Sasuke. But really, I'm not sure why you asked for a review. Your story is great! We obviously have different writing styles, but that don't mean much. Your grammar is still amazing, as are your plots, so good work! Keep it up, yo.

I do notice than in To Be Reborn you seem to have no idea what to write, and it gets a bit confusing, but still good sksksk good luck-