Woo late as hell but let's get the review train back on track, yeah? 

-harunos requested a review for their Naruto book! They want a mix between neutral and stone cold killer. Let's duggy my dudes

Alright, so I'm looking at the description right at this very moment and time. I have seen a lot of smart! Naruto AUs. They're one of the many AU cliches that people have done before, so let's hope you can add your own unique twist to it! There's nothing much wrong with cliches. I mean, they exist for a reason-- people write them. The only issue is that when you write a cliche, it's got to be good, because there's a million other options people could hop onto. 

So jumping in, your grammar is great. But it's really hard to read the second paragraph of the 'foreword' chapter. There's a lot of really amazing imagery, but you may have laid it on too thick, and what you're actually trying to say is getting lost in the words and symbolism. I was able to understand it after re-reading it four times, and it is really beautifully written. It's just very hard to understand outright. I also noticed you mentioned the White Fang. I think you're talking about Kakashi, maybe? The White Fang was his father so I'm not sure what's happening, you also mentioned suicide and I'm not sure where that fits in either.

Other than the confusion that presents itself in some of the longer, more jumbled paragraphs, the whole thing looks really good. Moving along nicely, awesome grammar. If you're looking for a decent smart! Naruto story, this definitely falls into the category! It's super well put together. I'm going to bring out the stone cold killer part of this though and tell you I don't see much that's setting it apart from the others like it.

You're an amazing writer. Some people just want to write a story, and it's not their aim to try and make that said story as unique as possible. And that's totally okay! You've got a lot of talent, so keep up the good work. It looks really good. Maybe don't go so heavy on the metaphors, and you're all good. It's looking like it's shaping up to be an awesome story. I wish you the best of luck!