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"Fab5 , Fab 5"

"Manik, Manik"..crowd going crazy and shouting fab5 and manik.

Soon spot light fell on five people entered the stage in their attitude.

A guy who at enter and hold the mic and said "hello, Mumbai...ready for us."in his deep voice which made girl crazy and shouted "yesss".

"Louder." He said. Crowd shouted yes, he smirked and started tuning his guitar.

"Manik Manik" all shouted. Manik closed his eye and started singing,

Her face was in his mind!

Bekhayali Mein Bhi
Tera Hi Khayal Aaye
Kyun Bichadna Hai Jaruri
Ye Sawal Aaye..(fab4 looked at him sadly)

Teri Nazdeekiyon
Ki Khushi Behisab Thi
Hisse Mein Fansle
Bhi Tere Bemisal Aaye

Main Jo Tumse Door Hu
Kyun Door Main Rahun
Tera Guroor Hu Uun
Aa Tu Fansla Mita
Tu Khwaab Sa Mila
Kyun Khwaab Tod Du

Bekhayali Mein Bhi
Tera Hi Khayal Aaye
Kyun Judai De Gaya Tu
Ye Sawal Aaye

(Manik deep voice, made a vacuum inside everyone heart. All went inside his voice and lsot in the song)

Raatein Dengi Bata
Neendon Mein Teri Hi Baat Hai
Bhoolun Kaise Tujhe
Tu Toh Khayalo Mein Sath Hai..(each and every line show his emotions and pain, he felt everyday)

Bekhayali Mein Bhi
Tera Hi Khayal Aaye
Kyun Bichadna Hai Jaruri
Ye Sawal Aaye

Nazar Ke Aage, Har Ek Manjar
Ret Ki Tarha Bikhar Raha Hai
Dard Tumhara Badan Mein Mere
Zehar Ki Tarah Utar Raha Hai

Nazar Ke Aage, Har Ek Manjar
Ret Ki Tarha Bikhar Raha Hai
Dard Tumhara Badan Mein Mere
Zehar Ki Tarah Utar Raha Hai(Manik went front and knelt down and singing with full emotion)

Aajmaane Aajma Le Ruthta Nahi
Faanslon Se Haunsla Ye Tutt'ta Nahi
Na Hai Wo Bewafa Aur Na Main Hu Bewafa
Wo Meri Aadaton Ki Tarah Chhutata Nahi

(Manik stop singing and breathing heavily looking down, all shouting excitedly. No one notice tears rolling down from his eyes.)

Fab looked at each other between Manik singing, except all, they can understand the pain behind this song. They all see this face was neutral but his heart screaming in pain.

"Love you guys. Meet you all soon." Fab5 shouted together and left to green room.

"Cabir you guys rocked it." Cabir girlfriend Navya hugged Cabir happily, Cabir smiled and hugged her.

"You too darling." Mukthi boyfriend Abhi hugged and kissed her forehead. But fab4 eye were on Manik who siting silently. Aliya walked to him and kept hands on her shoulder.

"Please talk to us Manik, I know it's hurt. But please.." her words cut when Manik stood up and gave her smile. Which is fake all know.

"Baby, I am ok." Manik said cupping Aliya cheek.

"Manik stop acting infront of us. We know you miss her. You love her, you are not at fault, please don't do this." Mukthi said crying, she can't see her brother like this.

"Manik, it's been 5years. She not going to come, she fucking left you and went. How many days you going to wait for her. She is fuc..." Aliya words cut by loud sound, all flinched back seeing angry Manik punched the mirror.

"Don't talk bad about her. I am angry at her but she will be back to me, she is manik's forever." Manik said angrily and left from there.

"Why you both didn't say anything?" Mukthi looked at cabir and Dhruv standing silently. Abhi and Navya were silent spector as they know Manik angry and about his love life.

"Mukthi, you both know how much he love her. He won't care anything against her." Dhruv said leaning on wall.

"Yes, for a girl who left him for her career and family. He destroying his life." Aliya said angrily.

Mukthi glared at Cabir and shouted "will you speak something?".

Cabir looked at them and sighed, "What you want me to say? 5years we are trying but he is not changing. There is no way we can get our Manik back." All sighed, abhi and Navya held her partner as support.

"There is a way." Mukthi thought and smirked at all.

"What?" All asked.

"Bringing her back in Manik life." Hearing mukthi Aliya too smriked, Cabir and Dhruv made horror face.

"You can't be serious Mukthi. You know how much angry Manik is? He will do something to her." Cabir said scaredly, even he angry at her, but still his brother inside him don't want to hurt her.

"Oh! Sister sentiment is stopping you. Come on Cabir she was my doll and Mukthi chotu too but she betrayal all us and went. For us Manik will come first then only all." Aliya said looking at Dhruv and Cabir who hesitating.

"Mukthi let's take time and think about it." Navya said seeing Cabir sad.

"We took more time thinking about it. Now it's time for action. Cabir and Dhruv you guys are in, I will be back." Mukthi said and went out taking her phone, Aliya went behind her. Cabir and Dhruv glanced at each other.

"Cabir why are you guys scared? Mukthi and Aliya trying to bring Manik girlfriend back." Abhi asked in confusion.

"Abhi you don't know about Manik angry, he is so possessive about her. He can't stay away even a miunte away from her, being 5 years away from her, he become a monster. He will hurt her surely." Cabir said looking down, Navya hugged him tightly.

"I hope all go fine" Dhruv said looking up. All sighed and hope for good.

Manik Malhotra:- age-28, handsome, serious type and introvert, won't talk much but if he talk other will shut up. Dream boy for all girls but lost his heart to his life. Mainly have a bad short temper and possessive for his thing. Lead singer for fab5 and ceo of MN(manik And Nandini) Company, his friends are his life and his POTATO too. He didn't miss her because he think he always with her but so angry on her for leaving him. Hate his parents, live with fab5.

Cabir Dhawan and Navya Kapoor:- age-28,25 respectively. Both are drama couples among their group. Navya enter Cabir life like angel and changed his life. Love each other more. But Cabir first love his food. Know Manik in and our but for 5year Manik maintaining distance from all. Miss his sister but little angry too. Wish her back in Manik life.

Mukti vardan and Abhimanyu Murthy:- age-27,28, she is Tomboy, girl form of Manik. Love Manik like anything and fab3, can so anything for them. Loved her chotu but she hate her a little now. Love Abhi alot who brought her out of depression. Abhi love her so much, know about Manik angry even he want Manik to get his love.

Aliya Saxena and Dhruv Vedant:- age-27,28 respectively, Lovely couple of group. Makeup kit wnd shy boy of group. Love each other like anything. Love Manik alot and their doll and sista too but Aliya hate her now, but Dhruv don't as he know she must have left for a reason. Want her back in Manik life.

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In California

One soul crying hearing in her room, hearing his voice, she feel pain in his voice. It's all her mistake,he is like this. She broken him, but she has too.

"I ..am..am sorry Manik. I know I hurt you so much. We can't be together. We are so different." She cried laying on floor and crying. Someone seeing her sadly, outside the room. Daily this happen to be habit of seeing her crying.

"Nandu" Nandini whipped her tears and sat in floor, saw Abhishek, her fiance standing. Yes, Nandini is engaged to him, two year ago.

"Stop crying." He whip her tears, Nandini sniffed and look down.

"I know you miss him, if you want I will..." Abhishek voice cut by Nandini nodded her head no.

"No, Abhi we are not meant to together. He will be happy in his life, i am sure fab4 will take care of him." Nandini said smiling, Abhishek looked at her sadly.

"I don't think so Nandini, if he love you truly then he must be waiting." Abhishek thought seeing broken Nandini. He sighed and hope so best.

Two souls are separated

Both are pain

Both are hurt, but mistake was by one

One is possessive and another is innocent

(I personally love this both jodi😍😍😍🙈🙈..if you guys have problem....You can imagine anyother character)

Nandini Murthy:- age-25, was a bubbly,cute, always smiling girl but now sadness, and tears are her friends. Doctor by profession in California, but born in Mangalore. Currently live with Abhishek in California.Love her family beyond anything, can sacrifies her life. Love a one person in past but now engaged to Abhishek Kumar, who she look as friend. Still feel heartbroken and sad for betraying her love and his friends who think her as their family.

Abhishek Kumar:- age-25, kind, sweet, lover boy. A good friend of Nandini for three years. And also a doctor by profession. Engaged to Nandini by their parents but he know she already love a guy. Sad seeing her crying always. Live with her in California both working their. Want to see her smile again.

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