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Deliverer: AS
Author: sisofthedevils


Title
Your title is very long for my taste. It is cool as well from the context of it but even then too long. However, you could try to shorten it without missing the meaning of it but leaving it like this is fine as well. The tick behind the title is not necessary. You can just mention at the right place that your book is completed. Other than that to the title: Excluding the length, I love it. It's damn unique and awesome.

Cover
Your cover may need another try. It is visible that the format is wrong. You have a normal font but at the time of "and" it's fancy. I can't conclude anything of it with the story. The hand is visible and not as well but makes all at that place look messy. Overall, how about you try asking a graphic designer for it?

Blurb
Your blurb hits deep. I love the way you compared historical events with your story's current situation. There is a direct connection to be seen there. You mention the situation, around which your story is working and also manage to convey the feelings of the main protagonist. Maybe the awards your book won could be in the bottom since it gives a push to the excitement of reading your story. Another small thing I did not like is the writing style. At places you could have perfectly joined two small sentences to make it more expressive but you did not.

Overall expression
I would definitely love to read it but the cover is slightly disturbing. The title is nice and the blurb makes up the excitement of the story. Definitely, this outlook made my expectations of the story quite high.

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