Client username:
kayanair

Editor Wattpad username :
InvisibleNerd23

No. of chapters edited:
Eight

What did you edit?:
Tenses, Grammar, Punctuation, Spellings.

An overall feedback:
The content of the book is amazing and pretty realistic. The characters, their friendship, their past is pretty interesting and it engages the reader to read more.

Some things that I would like to inform you about the content which can be improved. These are not major, but minor things.

- Try to keep writing in one tense only, there are instances when the tenses change, mostly in the dialogues of the character.

- The sentence which is spoken by any of the characters should be ended with a full stop, not a comma, and there should be no space between the full stop and the dialogue tag. There should also be space between the dialogue tag and the next sentence.
Wrong way- , "Sam said
Right way- ." Sam said

- Sometimes, the question mark and full stop, both are present, when a question is asked, only the question mark should be there.
Wrong way- ?." Keera asked.
Right way- ?" Keera asked.

Otherwise, it was a great and wonderful experience while editing the content in the book. I would love to read further as a reader.

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