Type of Story: Original, I think?

Author: yaswanthramanam

Estimated Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 826

Votes: 444

Description: First of all,i want to thank likitha9 for making such a nice cover.

This story is a scientific story.It was ranked #4 in the category of science fiction.

Many of my friends liked this story.So,I want to share this story to all the wattpad users.

Read and rate the story.Comments are welcomed.

Summary:-This story is about a scientist and his unbelievable invention.He invents a spectacles with powers.

But due to some reasons,the spectacles goes into the wrong hands.

The whole story deals how scientist bring back the spectacles to protect the world from the hands of evil.

Suggested If: You like sci-fi

My Review: The plot is choppy, but a little easier to follow than your Harry Potter fic—though it gets a little more confusing at the end. The reason it's hard to follow is because the chapters are short, choppy, and aren't written that well. You need to really work on your grammar—especially sentence fluency and spacing between punctuation. Oh, and you never want to use text talk in a story unless a character is actually texting! Consistently bad grammar (and even spelling) makes a story hard to follow, therefore it's also hard to review.

Rating (0-5): 1.5

Other Notes: Sorry this took forever to get out!