Type of Story: Original

Author: Fa1245

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 815

Votes: 188

Description: There are things that we often misunderstand as the difference between ego, obsession and love as well as the aspects of the human and the animal nature. Everyone has a choice. The question is what do you choose? Our human emotions are unpredictable that none might understand their motive. As we all know 'failure is the pillar of success', this is the story of our fellow mate-Abdul Khan. Whether you see him, always remember that we all have flaws underneath. To overcome, never criticize people who actually try to redeem themselves. Before you judge someone, remember-none are perfect as well as their views.

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Suggested If: you wanna read a fic about an MC who can talk with animals

My Review: I like the idea of Abdul being able to talk with animals, but overall the plot is kind of hard to follow, and I think that has to do with your writing style. Your writing seems very stiff and detached and it's easy to lose focus over what's going on because it's hard to get absorbed into the story. Your grammar and spelling is okay, but your sentence fluency is stiff, you mix up when to use singular vs. plural words, and you overuse transition words such as "Meanwhile," "Therefore," "And then," etc. Overall...well, I wish I could give you a more in depth review, but it's kind of hard to.

Rating (0-5): 2

Other Notes: Sorry this review took so long!