Type of Story: The Beatles

Author: judesilverhammer

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 289

Votes: 58

Description: I wake up in a chair, a plastic one specifically. I look around, and see familiar heads. Why did they look so familiar? I look around, and see an "on air" sign that was off. I look around, and see that there were a set of drums, two guitars on the floor and a bass leaned against the wall.

No, it couldn't be.

I look at the heads again.

They looked so vaguely familiar.

Was it so possible?

"Where am I?" I ask. If it was so genuinely possible, my heart was high with hopes.

Brooklyn Sheridan was an ordinary 19 year old girl living in 2016. She lived in Massachusetts and went to Harvard. She was in third year medical school. Brooklyn constantly felt out of place as for she loved The Beatles and Brooklyn, like many other girls, had goals and big dreams: she wanted to be an orthopedic surgeon. But what would happen to Brooklyn on the first day of winter holidays, when she presses track 1?

**The Beatles are NOT mine!**

**Not completed, but I'm constantly adding new chapters!**

Suggested If: you want to read a time travel fic

My Review: Okay, so...I don't hate the plot because I'm a sucker for time travel stories, but I do think it's poorly orchestrated. The first chapter is confusing and in the second chapter she's just...in a room surrounded by all four Beatles? What? Plus I think the time travel side to this fic is poorly portrayed: The Beatles have absolutely 0 reaction to Brooklyn's appearance besides just, "oh, you're here now? Cool, let's be BFFs!" Plus, even though there IS stuff happening in the plot, like the threat of John's death and the note George receives, it also feels like nothing is being done about it. Like, "shit John, you're gonna die in a few years, but we're just gonna sit here and fear it for 20+ chapters and not actually do anything about it." And "Shit George, you got a threatening letter? Well, worry not! We're just gonna assume everything is okay after no one shows up to the meeting place!" Grazing over major details like that is a very lazy way to write a story. As for the chapters themselves, they're kinda short and choppy. Your spelling's all right, but your grammar (especially your sentence fluency) needs some work. Keep in mind, though, that this is just your first fic and EVERY first fic, fanfiction or otherwise, is going to need a lot of work.

Rating (0-5): 1

Other Notes: Less plot points=more detail in the points you DO have