Type of Story: 1D

Author: 1DreamGirl101

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 729

Votes: 92

Comments: ...

Description: "Let me sail your heart and anchor mine in it"

A small island.

The seven seas.

A barmaid girl.

A navy seafarer boy.

What happens when he is sent to Malta to work? What happens when he sets eyes on her?

*Set in 1950's, Malta*

Cover by: Milkystyles

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Suggested If: You wanna read a Harry Styles AU

My Review: I like the overall idea for the plot, but there are a few points—such as "almost getting raped but then getting rescued"—that are clichè, so I would either edit or remove those. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar/spelling is pretty good, but there are some parts you need to work on—such as separating dialogue when different characters are speaking. Overall though, I think you're off to a good start.

Rating (0-5): 4

Other Notes: I love that it takes place in the '50s tbh