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Fanfic Review: My Thin White Duke

Type of Story: David Bowie

Author: MissMaccaSunshine

Story Rating Estimation: R

Reads: 2,709

Votes: 291

Comments: 851

Description: A different kind of daddy kink...

Anne had only just had her sixteenth birthday, but she was still as inexperienced as a child.

Then she caught the attention of her suave, charming neighbour...

"My innocence was bound to be soiled, but I wasn't going to let it - not without a fight."

(Based on the 'Daddy's Playhouse' series by @Enchancer97)

(Entry for The Wattys 2016)

Suggested If: you like David Bowie and/or daddy kink

My Review: I'm usually not a fan of daddy kink—I usually find it very weird and cringey. But I like how you've portrayed it: Anne's innocent, but not naive (I love her snide comments lol), and David knows when to back off. It's pretty realistic. I like your chapter lengths and, as usual, your grammar/spelling is pretty on point. Overall, though the plot personally wasn't my cup of tea, I really liked this fic and I think the rest of it will turn out pretty good!

Rating (0-5): 5 👌🏻

Other Notes: This was the first David Bowie fic I've ever read, and I quite enjoyed it 

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