Type of Story: Harry Potter

Author: yaswanthramanam

Estimated Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 88

Votes: 40

Description: https://www.wattpad.com/story/100608607-my-dream-school

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Suggested If: You like Harry Potter

My Review: The plot is choppy and hard to follow. The reason it's hard to follow is because the chapters are short, choppy, and aren't written that well. You need to really work on your grammar—especially sentence fluency and spacing between punctuation. Consistently bad grammar (and even spelling) makes a story hard to follow, therefore it's also hard to review.

Rating (0-5): 1

Other Notes: Sorry this took forever to get out!