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Fanfic Review: Mesmerized

Type of Story: 1D

Author: InfiniteFlames18

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 663

Votes: 41

Comments: 5

Description: Dictionary defines love as a strong feeling of affection. But I think we can all agree that everyone has different definitions, different approaches towards love. For some, love may mean companionship and friendship while for others it may mean trusting the other person with your life. Some find love in their childhood while others spend their whole life searching for love. But is love enough to live a blissful life? Sometimes, don't we need something else, some kind of assurance that the person we are giving our heart and soul to, won't hurt us? After all, falling in love is dangerous because doesn't everything that falls, gets broken?

Claire Adams is an ambitious and successful woman but with a terrible past which does not allows her to believe in love. Harry styles is her idol but also her complete opposite. Although egocentric and arrogant, he is someone who will go to great lengths for the people that he loves. What happens when they meet? Is the term opposites attract a myth or a fact?

"Perfect is not when two people are exactly similar. It's when you are opposites, but in a way complete each other......."

Suggested If: You wanna read a 1D fic where the boys are famous

My Review: The plot is clichè and, honestly, having Harry and Claire bicker back and forth all the time when they've known each other for 5 minutes is getting really old really fast. I like your chapter lengths, but your grammar and spelling (*especially* your grammar) need a LOT of work. Your sentences are choppy, you need to work on when/how to seperate dialogue, and you need to work on what words you do/don't need to capitalize. Overall, I understand that it's your first fic, but please at least work on your grammar.

Rating (0-5): 1

Other Notes: Editing would be fab

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