Fanfic Review: Masterpiece
(I'm tired af so I apologize for any mistakes lol)
Type of Story: 5SOS
Author: moonlight-mgc
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 103
Votes: 26
Comments: ...
Description: "I don't think I'll ever be able to stop loving you. No matter what you put me though. You can rip out my heart and walk away Violet, but you will always be my masterpiece."
Suggested If: you wanna read a Michael Clifford AU
My Review: The plot is a little hard to judge right now since there are only a few chapters, but it seems cute so far. I like how it's the guy crushing on the girl because it's the other way around in most other fics I've seen. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar/spelling is pretty good for the most part, though you do tend to mix up your and you're. Your=possession ("Is that your car?") and you're=you are something ("You're a good student). Overall though, it's off to a good start!
Rating (0-5): 3
Other Notes: Glad it was a Michael fic. He's my fav 😂
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