Type of Story: EXO

Author: catoquest

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 4

Votes: 1

Comments: 0

Description: Lying on top of a leather sofa, Misa giggled as his father tickles her and making her scream. Her mother was in their full-marbled kitchen, cooking her favourite dish.

Her mother is a chef and her father is a doctor. The family lives happily with Misa as their only child who is now 10years old. More and more love poured to Misa. Alas, Misa is socially awkward. She barely make friends her age.

Most of them despise her because of jealousy since most of them are not that fortunate compared to Misa. But Misa never brag about hheir wealth. Misa always wanted a friend but never did anyone wants to befriend with her. Except for a trustworthy child named Baekhyun who swore to protect Misa for all eternity.

Misa has one dream which is being a reporter. But her father and mother dispise reporters and their filthy scandalous ways. So Misa kept her dream a secret.

I wonder how her life goes on and if ever she will make it ?

Suggested If: you're a fan of EXO

My Review: The plot is a little hard to judge right now since there's only one chapter, but I think it's off to a decent start. Your chapter was a good length and I hope you keep that up, but there was a lot of information to keep up with so if you NEED to, try splitting the information into two different chapters. Your grammar and spelling needs some work, but it's pretty decent for not being a native English speaker. There IS one thing I suggest—remember to use apostrophes when they're appropriate. In the first chapter you use the words "Im," "cant," and "its (it is)," all which require an apostrophe before the last letter. You do use apostrophes sometimes which is good, you just need to be more consistent about it. Overall though, I think you're off to a decent start!

Rating (0-5): 3

Other Notes: If anything else, I suggest rewriting the summary. It reads more like a chapter and less like a caption of the plot.