Type of Story: Dan & Phil

Author: MissMaccaSunshine

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 199

Votes: 31

Comments: ...

Description: "Anyone can be truly glorious..."

Meet Glory, a shy, 14-year-old daydreamer. She is the youngest of five siblings, all much older than she is. She is often picked on for having siblings old enough to be her parents... and for having parents old enough to be her grandparents.

However, Glory still has hope for a bright future where no one can tease or make her miserable ever again. Her chance arrives one day in the form of two long-haired British boys.

Will Glory ever become truly glorious?

Suggested If: you wanna read a Dan & Phil AU

My Review: The plot is a little hard to judge right now with just three chapters, but I like it so far. Though there is one thing that confuses me a little—it's mentioned that Glory's last name is Lester and she has a brother named Philip, but when she and her sister are watching Dan & Phil, there's no indication that the Phil they're watching is related to them. So I'm wondering...mistake or just coincidence? Other than that though, your plot's going at a decent pace and I like your chapter lengths. Your grammar and spelling's pretty good aside from a few typos, but nothing major. Overall, I'd definitely continue!

Rating (0-5): 4

Other Notes: If the 'Philip' thing is just a coincidence, I'd try to clarify that more. Because right now I'm kinda confused 😅