Type of Story: The Walking Dead

Author: Homoxide

Estimated Story Rating: PG-13

Reads: 526

Votes: 34

Description: Ectopic

(ek-top-ik)

»occurring in an abnormal position or place ;

displaced«

"I BECAME WHAT

OTHERS COULD NOT BE"

Story by 1990acidkellx

The walking dead ™

Homoxide©®

Season 1- ◻▪

Suggested If: you want to read a Daryl Dixon fic

My Review: Well, the plot's alright. The beginning, with all the short chapters, was a little confusing so I'm gonna talk about the ones with actual plot. The plot's not terribly unique, but it goes at a good pace and thank God Daryl and Lillian aren't snogging after two chapters. There is one serious issue we need to discuss here, though, and that's spelling. Your spelling needs a LOT of work. You mix up a bunch of really simple words that sound similar, like your/you're, there/they're/their, through/threw, where/were/we're etc (tip: 'tho' is not a word, but 'though' is). I feel like this story would be a lot better, and DEFINITELY (not defiantly) a lot easier to follow if you polish up your spelling and grammar skills. Overall, I suggest perhaps putting the story on hold while you edit it? That *might* get you a lot more votes and reads too.

Rating (0-5): 1.5

Other Notes: I debated with 1.5 and 2, but my gut said 1.5 so I went with it. The story's not necessarily bad, it just needs some tender love and care before it might attract more readers.