Type of Story: The Beatles

Author: Enchancer97

Story Rating Estimation: R

Reads: 12,591

Votes: 787

Comments: ...

Description: "Come out and play with daddy, baby."

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In which a mentally derranged man finds himself obsessing over his neighbor's daughter.

©2016 Valerie Dominguez (Enchancer97) - All Rights Reserved

Suggested If: You like daddy kink

My Review: Aight, so I usually find daddy kink creepy. But for some reason I like this story??? Idk what it is, but it's written very well and just, idk, I think it's believable. Like, John didn't go on forever being with the girl, he was caught eventually and locked up. So it has realistic elements which I think is what I like about it. Your grammar/spelling is also very good and I like your chapter lengths. Overall, I was surprised at how good this story was, but it was in a pleasant way.

Rating (0-5): 4

Other Notes: I'm also not usually a sequel kinda person, but I think a sequel could be very fitting with the way you ended it :)