No one is reading this book, I am spending hours writing each update and no one is practically reading..

I am trying to adhere to the story line while keeping ur opinions in mind... but still, it feels like i am wasting my time  with this book.......

Like, the reads, votes and comments have gone down so drastically, i don't even know what to say...

Is this book that bad? If yes, I will discontinue it and if no, i shall continue, I want a straight answer.. Pls no mind games.......

I am trying to keep the plot as interesting and gripping as possible, so do you guys have any suggestions? Or should i just end it all here.........

I have a life outside but I am trying to get into the heads of my characters and potray their life properly... But is that all my misconception that you all like this book?

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