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Task 2 - IELTS Writing: [Relationship] - (1)

Đề bài: People today can perform everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions without meeting others face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and society as a whole? Is it a positive or negative development?

Brainstorming:

a. Body 1: Positive

- Save time and raise productivity:

   + Not arranging an appointment, commuting to meeting place and discussing face to face: time-consuming

-> performing tasks through Internet + phones + machines: superior way in favor of time + convenience

-> boost efficiency + have more time for other priorities

-> enjoy better quality of life

- Ex: emails -> work in their free time -> save time for family holiday, etc.

b. Negative

- Break off relationship between people:

   + Every task can be undertaken without meeting people directly 

-> bury themselves in the Internet + computers + technological devices >>> social circle

-> illnesses: diabetes, hypertension and heart diseases + psychological problems to individual well-being.

- Society: human interaction vanish + threats from internet fraud and cyber crime

My essay:

It is true that nowadays people's daily tasks such as shopping, banking and business transactions can be carried out in the absence of face-to-face interaction. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate that this phenomenon has both merits and demerits for individuals and society.

It is immediately obvious that this situation has brought people a large number of benefits. One of the most enormous advantages is its time-saving and productive quality. In lieu of wasting time on arranging an appointment, commuting to the meeting place to discuss work or wandering around shops and banks, human can now perform various tasks through internet, phones and machines. It is a superior way in favor of time and convenience, and thus the aforementioned phenomenon would boost working efficiency and help people have more time for their other priorities, namely family or leisure pursuits. The implication of this situation is that people would enjoy better quality of life, and the economic growth can be fostered due to the gain in productivity. Emails perfectly exemplifies this. Companies now eschew conventional communication methods in favor of emails, which reduces the period of time required by a particular working task. Moreover, office workers can work at home to save time for a family holiday and other activities, contributing to their contentment in life.

However, the phenomenon outlined above has distinctly negative effects on people. The main drawback of this trend is breaking off the present relationship between human. When every task can be undertaken without meeting the others directly, a large number of people are likely to bury themselves in the Internet, computers and technological devices rather than social interaction and outside activities. As a result, illnesses such as diabetes, hypertension and heart diseases and psychological problems to individual well-being can be caused. In long term, human interaction and social circle may vanish, preventing the community to become close-knit. Furthermore, the online world may pose great threats such as internet fraud and cyber crime to the internet users, and thus bring a sense of insecurity to individuals and society. 

In conclusion, people's ability to perform almost all everyday tasks without meeting each other directly has both benefits and drawbacks, and its effects on the citizens and nations cannot be underestimated.

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