Title: Of love and lies.

Author: swag_gerism

Cover: Dark and intriguing. That's only what I got to say, because seriously the cover is creative. Personally when I saw the cover, I immediately thought to myself that the white stripes represents love, while the black represent lies.

Title: Your title is really amazing. It's different from what we've all been hearing. It's definitely catchy, and I'm totally loving it.

Summary: 'our existence is a mark.
'of trenchancy and irony;
'of love that gives birth to lies
'and the sweet feeling of agony'

If this is not short and hitting close to home, then I don't know what else is.

Flow and Language: 'that this life we live is an irony of love, lies and agony'... Definitely saving this line forever(Lol)😀

'I'm an arsonist of your deepest fears, baby, and that is the way I will love you.'... Say what!!!!👍

So the chapter chemistry is definitely the 'it' for me.

'Chemistry isn't only between atoms.'
'ionic bonds are like lovers, between a metal and a non-metal, like how opposites attract.'
'chemistry is between humans too.'

Overall(Based on fifteen chapters)

You know when poetry wordings are so deep that words can't describe how amazing it is. That's how I feel right now, so good job.

💖What I liked.

❤Your words was like a hammer driving a nail to the wood. It drove the right feeling home.

🚫What I didn't like.

*Your letter 'i' is not capitalised. Do work on that.

Overall assessment(9.7/10)

I strongly recommend this poem.

Thanks for requesting
Emma❤

Btw... It's 2:00am right now. So sorry if there's any typo.