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#Review 13

Book title: What we left behind
Author: stxrkissed

This review will take a different format because the story on it's own is a unique different.

Review wrapped in one.

So your book was really amazing, and although it only had three chapters I can definitely see the potential in the book.

Your Cover was good, but I felt like it didn't portray your plot well. One needs to be able to deduce a bit of your story from the cover.

Your Title was very unique and fitting. I don't have anything against it.

Overall analysis
Your plot was amazing, it was a bit in between cliche and something new. I don't really have much to say except sometimes your dialogue change was a bit confusing. Sometimes I get lost who is talking to who, who is being talked to, and who is performing an action. Just work on that as soon as you can.

I strongly recommend and I give this book a 4.5/5

Keep doing what you are doing.
Remember to stay fabulous.
Love, Emma💕

         

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