Light Against Shadow
Book Title: Light Against Shadow
Author: MsCrysaniaMajere
REVIEW:
Title
It's a pretty strong title. I liked that it was not too specific or too vague and felt right in the context of the story while also being mysterious and intriguing for a more wider audience.
Cover
The cover is good. It works well in context with the title and story. I would recommend some minor editing to align the text in the centre and increase the font as it would make the cover look more organised.
Description
The description is to the point and well crafted. However, I would have liked to know more about the story before I went in. The book has a very unique and interesting premise, so I think it could be elaborated a bit more in the description.
Plot
This was the strongest part of the story in my opinion. The unique premise and the well thought out world and setting for the story serves well in carrying the plot and characters. I liked that the story didn't waddle around with unnecessary details and started straight with the action. The subtle mystery element of the story also plays well with the fantastical elements to create a story that is truly one of a kind.
Characters
The characters and character dynamics are good, but they could be make better very easily. I enjoyed reading their interactions a lot but there was still the need for me to know more so that the scene is more impactful.
Grammar
The story is well written with good grammar, vocabulary and use of proper tense. The sentence structure does appear a bit repetitive sometimes but it can be easily fixed in a second draft.
Rating: 3.75/5
Book star: 4
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