Book Title: ILLUSION OR REALITY

Author: emotionalwriter16

REVIEW:

Title

The title is okay but in my opinion, it's open ended or vague. It has more of a literary fiction vibe to it as well which doesn't fit well with the story.

Cover

The background for the cover is beautiful and the cover is pretty good. I would recommend a bit of editing to centre the text and reduce the font slighty because one end of the text appears to be cut off.

Description

The description is good but I would like to know more before I start a story. Again, it's a bit vague and since the theme can be quite common in the given genre, the readers would like to know more before they decided to read your story. Additionally, the emoji's don't serve to add much to the description.

Plot

The plot was engaging but it appeared a bit confusing to be at first. I would have like to know more context to the setting and context of the story before the action began so that it didn't feel disorienting. Since it's a mystery plot, I can't be quite sure on how I feel about the plot as a whole unless I read the whole book but I think it definitely shows promise to develop into an interesting story.

Characters

The TV series like writing style of the story played well to explain the plot but it significantly weaken the characters. The protagonists appeared a bit under-written so I would like to have seen more of each persons quirks, personalities and flaws along with their sense of style, humour etc.

Grammar

The written style of the story being similar to that of a TV show rendered well in the context of the story to serve for the mystery elements. However, with a bit of formatting, paragraph reorganizing and editing, it would be more engaging and action packed.

Rating: 3/5

Book star: 3