Book Title: Fearless Love

Author: Coiner789

REVIEW:

Title

It's a pretty strong title and fits well with your story, but it is quite a generic title.

Cover

The cover is really pretty. It gives a good indication as to the theme, ideas of your book and is quite captivating as well. The only change I would recommend is to make the colour of the title brighter so it's stands out more against the background.

Description

The description was very engaging. I think it sets up the story well without revealing too much. I'm also really appreciated that you included warnings, because most authors forget to include it despite it's importance to the audience.

Plot

I liked how your story began casually only to steadily increase the stakes. The quick paced nature of your writing serves to deliver the action well and with impact to the reader. The only thing I would recommend to leave a few small details out and then include it later in the story for relevance. This will allow for a subtle mystery aspect to keep the reader further engaged and asking questions.

Characters

I enjoyed reading your main character and related to her quite well. The voice and narration from her perspective was very well done, and her character shined through very well. The humour was subtle but well executed without seeming like you tried too hard. It flowed well with the story and also helped the reader to develop an emotional understanding with the characters.

Grammar

Overall, your story was very well written, punctuated and perfectly worded. I really enjoyed your writing style. It was beautiful without seeming like purple prose. The only criticism I have here is to include a few character tags in the longer dialogue scenes as it appears a bit confusing sometimes.

Rating: 4/5

Book star: 4