Book Title: Annoying Home Mates

Author: RehanaSiraj

REVIEW:

Title

The title is okay, but it could have been a little more creative and more representative of the story.

Cover

The cover is not very indicative of the story as the cover would be more appealing to a young audience which was not the intent of the author I would assume.

Description

The description is too short for the reader draw any conclusion. I'd recommend using an excerpt from your story or a brief summary of the plot without spoiling it too much in order to gain the readers attention.

Plot

Like most stories with a forward romantic plot/subplot, the plot appears to be a slow-burn. From the first few chapters I read, the story seems intriguing and fast paced, which also lead me to feel like a lot of necessary details which were required to set the scene were missing.

Characters

The character dynamics were fairly well developed, but they initially appeared like cardboard cutouts of various tropes. With a little more detailing and personality in the dialogue, the characters could easily be fleshed out.

Grammar

I was initially put of by the overuse of ellipses. Punctuation and formatting the story seemed to be the most obvious one's to point out in this category.

Rating: 1.75/5

Book star: 2