Hello guys so this book needed some serious editing so here it is.

First  of  all, I guess you all have seen my new cover so am giving a very loud shootout to musical_candy for making that awesome cover for me ❤❤ and helping me with editing this book.
 

                   Emilia's POV
I woke up in the morning, and am getting ready for my daily hunting.
I took my bow, arrow and daggers.

Hey so am Emilia Winters. I'm turning  sixteen today  which is a big joy to me.
I love hunting it's a hobby too. I'm a girl with crystal blue eyes and shoulder length brown hair with strikes of blue in it.

I went to the Forrest and climbed the top of a tree. I spot a deer not too far from me. I quietly take out my arrow and set it on the string of my bow. 

I aim at my target and released the arrow.

Bingo" I cheered when it successfully hit the deer.

The deer struggled for a while, but eventually gave up and drop dead.

I always bring a sack with me, it for carrying my hunts.

I jumped off the tree and and walked to the dead meat ahead of me. I put it in my sack and start my journey back home.

On my way home, I saw my brother Jack running towards me. He stopped in front of me panting.

After catching his breath he spoke "Emmy I have been looking for you "

I  handed over the sack to him "what the matter? "

He widened his eyes "Emmy! Girl today is the choosing

OMG" I yell. We  both ran home. As soon as I got home, I took my bath.

After  bathing I dried myself with a towel and changed into a kneen cut skinny jeans and a matching color hoodie. I made my hair into a messy nun and slipped into my sneakers.

I made my way down stairs in a hurry, almost tripping down the stairs.

My mom and my two brothers (Jack and Jill), were circled around a beautiful cake which was on the center table.

They sang the birthday song for me and we cut the cake. I thanked them and eat a slice of the creamy cake.

Gotta go now. I don't want to miss the choosing.

Mom nodded and gave me her blessing. I gave them all a peck on their cheeks before bolting out of my house.

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