Hay guys i just want to write a drabble on current track in the show i hope u all like this

In this drabble i won't include dhara and chiku track it is only about shivi because i don't like dhara in the show as well as i don't hate her but according to me dhara and chiku's track is over dramatic i think because kabhi na kabhi vo baccha dhara ko chod kar chala jaayega to dhara se itna attachment dikhaane ki kya zaroorat thi so this drabble is only about shivi plzz dhara fans iss story pad rahe hai to don't take it as negative everyone have their own opinion

So let's start the story..........

So the scene starts from where shiva leaves in anger and raavi becomes very sad because she want to celebrate her success with him, with her husband, her boothnath, her supporter, her SHIVA

Raavi to kanta kakai's daughter in law : dekhiye aap dusron ki khushi mein shamil nhi hua to bhi koi problem nhi hai lekin khushi si mahol ko kharab mat karo aapse vinathi karti hun

Raavi to suman : maa mujhe koi party karne ka man nhi hai sorry maa aap enjoy karo

Raavi to dhara : sorry dhara di chiku ki welcome kushi kushi nhi kar paa rahi hun

Raavi takes chiku in her hands : welcome to our family mere champ ( chiku smiles
Raavi sees this and she too smiles but her eyes are filled with tears she places him again in his place and goes to her room)

Everyone are very sad because of shivi's fight

Suman : ab yaha koi party nhi hogi sab chali jao plz

Kanta kaki : par suman....... ( interupted by suman)

Suman : kya par haan ( angrily) dusron ki parivaar ke baare mein chinta karna chod aur teri bahu ko thoda akkal sikhaana samjhi.... Ab nikal meri ghar se nikal..... (She shouts)

Everyone leaves and all family members gathered at dinning area for dinner

Dhara : khana lagaati hun sab khana khalo aur krish raavi ko bulaao

Krish goes but comes back because she refused to come

Krish : bhabhi, raavi bhabi khana khane se mana kardiya

Suman : mujhe bhi khane ka man nhi hai
( suman is about to go but dhara stops her )

Dhara : maa plz thoda khalo aapko khana zaroori hai dawai bhi khani hai na plz aur aap nhi khayi to hum kaise kha sakte hai rishitha bhi pregnant hai aur krish to bukh seh nhi sakta plzz humare liye

Everyone convinced her they all ate food and left to their respective rooms

Scenes changes

Shiva is in very anger he roams in street like a lion he is not in his sence he is walking in middle of the road ( imagine rishitha shiva ko insult karti to shiva sencelessly road par chalta hai na par vaha sad hai aur yaha gussa hai just imagine )

While shiva is walking like that raavi sees him from behind she calls him but he doesn't respond because he is out of his sence now he is not ready to listen anyone raavi is continuously calling him suddenly a truck is coming with high speed the driving is shouting that " hato samne se truck ka breaks fail hogaya hato raaste se " everyone are giving way to that truck but shiva is not at all moving raavi sees this but before she could go towards him the hit shiva abd he is badly injured blood is all over spreaded he is breathing heavily raavi ran towards him and put his head in her lap and says

Raavi : shiva tujhe kuch nhi hoga ankhe khol

Shiva : ab to tu khush hai na tu.......tujhe rokne wala koi nhi hoga.....( it is becoming difficult to talk to him )maine humesha tere saath diya par tune mujhse baatein chupaya par mujhe tujhse ek baat kehni hai mai kabhi teri tarakki se nhi jalta hun bas thoda darta hun ki tujhe iss buri duniya mein akele bejhne mein bas itni si baat hai ( raavi is continously crying she is listening to him and looking here and there for help but unfortunately no one is ready to help her, shiva continuous) lekin raavi mein tujhse sach mein bahut pyaar karta hun jab tu phone use karti mujhe isiliye bahut gussa aata hai kyunki mai tujhe miss karta hun par tu pura din uss phone mein Gussi rehti hai bas itni si baat par tujhe pata hai na mere gusse ke baare mein phir bhi...... Jaane se pehle ek baat kehna chahta hun mai humesha tujhse hi pyaar kiya aur karta rahunga...... ( now it is very difficult to breathe for him literally he is speqking his last words and finally he says ) I... I... LO... LOVE.... U..... CHI... CHIPKALI..... ( and he left his last breathe in his chipkali's laps)

Raavi : shiva ( she shouts at top of her voice and opens her eyes and searches for shiva but finds no one in her room )

(So guys it is a bad dream of raavi, chappal mat phekna aur gaali mat dena agar accha nhi laga to choli 😚 )[ it is sorry agar mujhe kisiko manan hai to mai waise hi choli bolti hun 😅]

Everyone comes to shivi's room because of raavi's voice and all are shocked because raavi is trying very hard to breathe she is unable to breathe properly

Dhara : raavi kya hua tujhe raavi ( she goes near raavi and rubs her back with her hand ) krish jaa aur paani lekar aao

Krish brings water and dhara makes raavi to drink water but still raavi is unable to breathe properly so dhara hugs her and says

Dhara : bas bas koi baat nhi sab yaha hi hai koi bura sapna hoga bas (breaks hug)
Gheri saans le ( now raavi follows dhara instructions and take deep breathe now she can able to talk now again dhara speaks up ) ab bol kya hua kya sapna dekha tune ( raavi again remembers the dream and cries badly everyone tries to console her but all the efforts are useless )

Scene changes

Shiva is walking on the roads but he is lost in his thoughts he is hurt rather than anger. he is anger because raavi hide the things even when he is supporting her with whole heartedly he stood with her when no one supported her this hurted him alot

Shiva ( in his mind ) : kyun raavi kyun kiya aisa tune mai humesha tere saath diya phir bhi tune mujhse chupaya mujhse.....tere boothnath se. kyun raavi itna kyun badal gayi tu pehle to har ek choti si chiz mujhe batake hi karti to ab kya badal gaya kya hogaya hai tujhe aur iss baat se mai gussa hun lekin tujhe yeh sab mera ego lag raha hai pehle to mere bina kehe hi samaj jaati tu par ab kitni baar samjaaun lekin tu samajne keliye tayyar hi nhi hai kya hamaare beech ab sirf ladaayi hi bachi hai ( his thoughts are interrupted by someones pull)

Few seconds back a car comes in high speed behind shiva but he is lost on his thoughts so one man come from side and pulls him his side)

That man : kaha kho gayi ho aap.agar ab mere aane mein thoda late hua to kya hua hoga....aap ko kuch hojata to

Shiva : i am sorry vo mai kuch soch raha hun isilye ( interrupted by that man )

That man : aap raavi ji ki pati hona ( shiva nods his head in yes ) aapse milke bahut accha laga

Shiva : par mai aapko nhi jaanta hun?? ( with a confused face )

That man : mai aapke gali mein sabji bejta hun raavi ji wajah se ab mera business bahut bad gaya hai pehle to din mein do baar khana milna bhi mushkil hojata tha par ab...... ab koi problem nhi hai sab raavi ji wajah se unhone hi mere paas sabji lene waqt ek video banaya aur sab uss video dekh kar mere paas sabji lene aate hai.. Raavi ji ne sirf meri nhi ramesh ko bhi help kiya hai ( shiva makes confused face listening ramesh name sabji waala gusses this and says) ramesh mera hi dost hai wo chudiyaan bejta aur paani puri waale ka bhi help kiya hai raavi ji ne ( shiva gives a proud smile ) aur aapka jodi bhi bahut mast hai aur mujhe lagta hai raavi ji aapse bahut se bhi bahut zyaada pyaar karte hai mai unka har video dekhta hun unki har video mein aapki naam le bagair pura nhi hoga p mera pati yeh hai, vo hai mera boothnath yeh pasand hai agar vo 100 sabd kahe to unmein 60% sabd aapke baare mein hi hoga. Aap bhi thoda kam hai kya aaj kal aapni patni ko kaamyaab hone mein kaun saath de rahe hai zyaadatar log ego se jaljaate hai agar unka patni usse zyaada kamaaliya to par aap aisa nhi hai... Uss bolenath ne badi furzat se aapki jodi ko banaya hai.... Aise hi humesha raavi ji ka saath dete rehna...aur hamesha khush rehna.....

( shiva nods his head someone pulls his hand down he sees down and sees a cute little girl he bends down to her height )

Shiva : aap kaun ho? (Asks while caressing her cheek )

Little girl : mai inki ( points towards sabji wala ) beti hun mai raavi di ki bahut badi fan hun kya aap mere liye unki autograph le aa sakte ho uncle plzz ( with puppy eyes)

Shiva : sirf autograph hi kyun kal mai aapko hamare ghar lejaata hun tab uske saath photos bhi khinchlo aur videos bhi banalo thike ( smiles at that girl )

Little girl : thanks uncle ( happily hugs shiva ) aap bahut acche ho ( and kisses his cheek )

Later that sabji wala and that little girl leaves from there shiva also goes to his special place and sits on his tree's branch and thinks about sabji wala words and raavi's words also )

Some flashbacks in his thoughts

Raavi : mai to bas surprise dena chahti thi par dhara di ki jaane ki vajah se sab ka mood off hogaya.......

Raavi : mai bas apna success ki khushi aapke saath baatna chahti thi isiliye khana mangvaaya par yaha kisiko meri success ka khadar hi nhi hai.....

Raavi : shiva plz ek glass pani le aana bahut thak gayi hun aaj......... ( now he thinks her sentence in correct way, he understands taht she is really tired at that time )

Raavi : kitni mushkil se ghar aayi hun tujhe pata bhi hai... Mere cab kharab hogayi thi... Mera sandals tut gaye the... Aur mujhe paidal aana pada.....

Raavi : phone karne keliye phone chalna bhi zaroori hai.......

Raavi : shiva yeh le mein tere liye shirt select karke rakhi thi tu party yahi pehna aaj ( with her sweet smile and happy face ) ( guys agar dailogues show se thoda alag hai to maaf kardo vo kya haina mujhe pura dailogues yaad nhi rehte hai plz neglect mistakes and enjoy the story)

Shiva to himself : yeh kya kardiya tune shiva tere gusse mein tere chipkali ke baare mein socha hi nhi tune kitni khushi se tere paas ayi thi uss din dd lekar par tune kya kiya haan kar diya galti baat chupaakar aur tu kya kiya tu bhi chilladiya uss bechari par.... Aur kal raat takke aakar bas ek glass pani hi to maangi thi aur tab bhi uss par bhadak gaya aur aaj bhi shirt ke baare mein bhi gussa hogaya kya hogaya tujhe shiva humesha sab kehte hai tere gusse ko khaboon mein rakh par nhi tujhe to bas teri chipkali par chillana hi aata hai. Aaj bhi kitna special din tha uska vo bhi kharab kardiya tune vo chipkali abhi tak vaha ro rahi hogi abhi jaata hun uske paas ( and starts to go home )

Meanwhile at pandya niwas

Raavi is crying remembering her bad dream and everyone is trying to make her calm

Suman : yeh markundi gay kya hogaya tujhe itna kyun ro rahi tu shanti se bolo kya hua ( suman moves her wheelchair towards bed and puts her hand on hers )

Raavi : shi.... Shiva.... ( speaks in between her cries )

Suman : haan kya hua shiva ko??......

Raavi : vo...... Vo...... mujhe ek sapna aaya tha uss...mein.... Uss mein(she again cries )

Suman : bas bas sapna hi to hai kya hua bata mujhe ( asks her like a mother asks her little child)

Raavi : sapne mein shiva ka acci..... Accident ho gaya aur... aur vo mujhe firse chod kar chala gaya....... ( she again cries but this time suman hugs her like a mother )

Dhara : raavi bas karo plzz aur rona mat ek bura sapna hi to hai..... Ek kaam kar krish aur dev tum donon jaa kar shiva ko ghar lekar aao ( dev and krish moves out off shivi's room and goes towards main door they are about to open the door but at teh same time it is opened by someone from outside and it is none other than shiva, shiva is very confused to see their tensed faces )

Shiva : kya hua tum donon iss waqt kaha jaarahe ho aur itna ghabra hua kyun lag rahe ho?

Krish : are bhai hamse baad mein baat kar pehle raavi bhabhi ke paas chal vo bahut ro rahe hai

Shiva : par kyun??( with very tensed expression )

Dev : tu chal ( he says this and drags shiva towards their room they reached their room but stood at the door only and listens raavi's words )

Raavi : sab meri galti hai mujhe shiva ko sab bataa dena chahiye tha mere surprise wajah se vo itna gussa hogaya pehle se hi shiva mujhe bahut support kiya jab bank se call aaya tabhi usse bataa dena chahiye tha lekin mujhe laga agar koi prank hai to sab mujh pe hasenge isiliye socha tha ki jab paise haat mein aajaaye sabko surprise dungi par dhara di ahmedabad jaane ki wajah se koi surprise lene ki mood mein nhi hai isiliye shiva ko room mein bataayi thi par excitement mein yeh bhul gayi thi ki shiva ko baatein chupaana pasand nhi hai aur mujhe bhi usss shanti se baat karni chahiye thi ulta mai bhi uas par chilla diya sab meri galti hai...... ( cries very badly like jab maami raavi ko panauti kehti hai to shiva ko gale lagakar kaise roti hai waise hi yaha suman ko gale lagaakar roti hai ) agar mera sapna sach hogaya to mai jee nhi sakti maa ek baar shiva kone darr seh chuki hun firse shiva se juda hine ki himmat nhi hai mujh mein uske bina mai kaise jee sakti hun maa ( she continously crying seeing her like this everyone have tears in their eyes )

Shiva ( wipes his tears and asks dev ) : raavi kis sapne ke baare mein baat kar rahi hai dev?

Dev says him everything to shiva. Shiva gets hell anger on himself because he is not present with his chipkali when she needs him more, it is all because of hos bloody anger he is feeling guilt for behaving like that with her. Shiva thinks that enough of all this anger, tears and fears he should be with his chipkali and now she needs him the most

Shiva : chipkali

Everyone in the room turns towards door listening Shiva's voice. Shiva and raavi had a eye contact tears are coming from raavi eyes but shiva is trying very hard to control his tears in front of family members. They don't need words their eyes are talking alot with each other. Their eye contact is broken by suman's voice

Suman : chal hum sab chalte hai pati patni le beech hum kya kare

Dhara : par maa raavi ki halaat...... ( interrupted by suman )

Suman : uska pati hai na vo dekh lega....

( everyone moves out of the room but suman stops near shiva and says )

Suman : sambhal apni biwi ki ro ro kar kya halaat bana liya hai usne ( in a worried tone, shiva nods in yes )

After everyone leaves shiva sits on bed beside raavi and takes her hand in his and kisses it

Shiva : kya hua itna kyun ro rahi tu bas ek sapna hi to hai

Raavi : mujh mein aur himmat nhi hai shiva agar tu fir se mujhe chod kar chala gaya to mai jee nhi sakti i can't loose u again manti hun galti meri hi hai mujhe baat chupaana nhi chahiye thi par tu bolta hai mai ghadedi hun dobi hun hogayi galti ab maaf kardo mujhe mai doobaara aisa nhi karungi promise bas mujhe chod kar mat jaa mai tere bina adhura hun shiva agar tu nhi hai to...... ( she couldn't complete because shiva puts his hand on her mouth and covers it )

Shiva : kitna bolti hai chipkali tu thoda saans to le.. Bas boli jaarahi ho boli jaarahi ho mujhe bhi bolne ki mauka de ( now he holds hee hands with his both hands more firmly ) galti meri bhi hai itna gussa hone ki zaroorat hi nhi thi kuch zyaada hi over react kardiya aur tujhe pata hai na mere gusse ke baare mein sorry maaf kardo jab shaanti se socha to laga ki itna badi baat bhi nhi jitna hum bana diya hai maine har phaisle mein tera saath diya hai tu sahi karthi to encourage karta hun aur galat kiya to rokta hun. To jab tu mujhse baat chupaayi to mai thoda hurt hogaya hun. Aur jab mai tujhe uss model ke saath dekha to mera hurt gusse mai badal gaya isiliye chilla diya aur kal paani wala baat bhi bada kardiya jab ki tu tak ke aayi hai sorry apne iss boothnath ko maaf kardo plzz ( with cute and puppy face saying this he wipes her tears )

Raavi : mujhe bhi maaf kardo sorry na jaane mein galti hogayi mujhse ( saying this she hugs him. She locks her hand around his neck and shiva locks his obe hand on her waist and puts another hand on her hair ) mujhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaayega na?? ( listening this shiva tightens the hug like giving her assurance and says )

Shiva : kabhi nhi...... ( they be in that position for some time and shiva breaks the hug and puts her hair behind her ears which came on her face and cupped her face then asks )

Shiva : khana khaya tune??

Raavi nods her head negatively

Shiva : kyun?

Raavi : tu bhi nhi khaya na

Shiva : kaun kaha tujhse mai to pet bhar ke khake aaya hun

Raavi : jhoot mat bol chal saath mein kaate hai

Raavi is about stand from bed but shiva stops her by holding her hand

Shiva : tujhe kaise pata hai ki mai nhi khaya

Raavi : bas mujhe sab pata hai tere baare mein

Shiva smiles by listening her words and cups her face and kisses on her forehead raavi and shiva both closes their eyes and feels the moment

Raavi : chal shiva bahut bukh lag rahi hai
( like a small kid )

Shiva smiles at her cuteness and kisses her cheek and says " chal khate hai saath mein "

Shiva and raavi enjoys their food together by feeding each other in between later they both goes to their room and sleeps in each other arms raavi hugs him very tightly because of that bad dream she is scared to leave him seeing her fear shiva also holds her tightly

Shiva : hey chipkali tujhe pata hai aaj mai tere ek cute sa chotu sa fan se mila hun vo bahut cute hai par ek baat acchi nhi lagi mujhe usmein...... ( frowned)

Raavi lifts her head up which is on his chest and loons at him confusingly shiva continues

Shiva : vo tujhe di bula rahi hai acchi baat hai aur mujhe uncle yeh kya baat huyi usse mein uncle lag raha hun kya

Raavi : ab jo hai vo hi lagega naaa..... ( teasingly )

Shiva : accha ab mai tujhe uncle lag raha hun abhi dikhata hun kaun uncle ( ge starts tickling her raavi starts laughing and moves like a snake after some time both get tired and again comes into same position means again lays in each other arms )

Raavi : tu jo bhi hai sirf mera hai...sirf mera.... ( Saying this she kisses his chest and again says ) mera boothnath aur mera handsome wala uncle ( teasingly )

Shiva : phir se........ ( irritatingly )

Raavi : accha sorry baba... Sorry......

Shiva : dekh kal hamare ghar mein party hai to thoda saj daj ke aana

Raavi : shiva phir se party ki koi zaroorat nhi hai....... ( suddenly becomes sad )

Shiva : kyun zaroorat nhi hai meri biwi itna famous hogayi hai itna accha kama rahi hai to party to banti hai

Raavi : shiva plzz

Shiva : raavi abhi tak mujhe sab pandya store wala shiva iss naam se hi pehchante the par ab " are aap shiva ji haina raavi ji ka pati ek selfie le sakta hun kya " aise puch rahe hai sab. Mujhe bahut proud feel ho rahi hai tujhpe. To isiliye tere success ko hum zaroor celebrate karte hia thike.....

Raavi is very happy to know that shiva is very proud of her. Raavi kisses him on his cheek in response

Later they slept in each other arms very peacefully and the next pandya family celebrated raavi's success and in that party shiva called that sabji wala and his daughter and fullfilled that little girl's wish.....

The End

I just wanted to write a drabble on the current track because some of the shivi fans are defending either shiva or raavi but here they both are equally correct and equally wrong

I have read a comment on insta that some fans are saying this " jab dhara ne kayi baat chupaaya to shiva ko kuch problem nhi hua to raavi ne chupaaya to kya badi baat hogayi" aur kuch log yeh bhi kaha ki "husband and wife sab share karna zaroori nhi hai " seriously guys shiva dhara usse sab share kare kyun expect karga?? lekin raavi se vo expect karega na shiva usse pyaar karta hai to usse jaanne ka haq banta hai sab raavi ki support mein aagaye hai comment section mai maanti hun shiva ki bhi galti hai usse bhi samajhna chahiye tha mai yaha kisi ko sahi aur kisi ko galt ve nhi kar rahi hun i am a #shivi fan not a #shiva or #raavi fan plzz don't spread negativity about the show in social media yrr pandya store trp abhi bhi 1.5 par hi ataki hui hai agar aapke kehne se agar kisine show dekhna bandh kardiya to tab hume humara #shivi ko dekhne nhi milegi baat ko samjho plzz it is a kind request from this #shivi fan

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Bhuvana...... ❤️