"Ack.. Work damnit."

Jeff struggles with a camera his coworker has just bought, but is too stupid to know how todays technology works.

"Hey!"

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Welcome back to my little campaign. Here we go: School. Personal hell and never ending drama awaits you!

Yeah.. Right. Typically every protagonist is bullied or not very popular. Again. The community is not a bunch of unloved, self-concious teenagers. They all hate school? That can't be. School sucks a lot, but eveyone skips over it.

I mean, why make your character a teenager if you aren't going to write about their school life? Make them normal. You know, maybe wanting to actually try in school and make good grades?

They don't have to be #1 in their class. But you can't exclude that they attend school! Unless they're a troublesome kid. But that's a cliche. We're tired of seeing it.

On another note. Why are you immune to all illnesses, yet can jump from three story buildings without breaking a leg? It's highly unrealistic. So, you can walk on a fractured ankle.. But can't get the sniffles? Or go to doctor appointments? Or your friends and family get sick?

Wait! They can't get sick, because you never write about them.

Character development is key in any novel. You may have good ideas, but if you don't take the time to properly write them and use good plot and grammar, people lose interest fast. I know that I do.

Could be refreshing to see someone go to the doctor. Unless it's boring or has way too many details.

And why is it that when Jeff attacks the protagonist, they just walk it off like it's nothing.

Bitch, you were just stabbed! If you wrote about your family instead of having them killed off, then they could take you to the hospital. Why would you hide the injury? I could understand you'd want to protect your family if you felt threatened. Trust me, if Jeff wanted your family dead then he would have killed them. He's playing games. You'd take the fun out of his games if you died of an infection.

Considering this.. Also know Jeff is still alive and can also get sick. Even killers can break their bones. Knock his ass out and call the cops.

Based on the internets perspective of Jeff, he seems like an annoying teenaged boy. Or the fake definition of depressed.

Depression isn't a phase. It's an incurable state of mind, which not only numbs feelings and interest, but the fact people pretend to be depressed for attention is disgusting. Fake emos are also disgusting.

I'm an XD emo, you're an owo emo.

WE'RE NOT THE SAME.

Okay. Here is my personal perspective of the killer. He's deranged, void of emotion. Or his emotions are severely repressed. He never grew up the way most teenagers do. He never experienced life, his first kiss, love, learning to drive or even graduation from school. He'd be scared of getting close to anyone. He lost his brother and fell into insanity and his own depression after failing to cope with his sudden change of fate. So, he feels betrayed by people. Holding no trust in anyone, but he never really grew up, his brain still cannot cope his feelings or emotions correctly. He's not mentally retarded or clumsy. He's a very stealthy and skillful killer. Because this is all he knows, and he's also scared of trying new things. But this could also spark curiosity in other peoples lives. He'd try to feel what they feel, then he'd eventually snap and kill them because they are afraid of him. Then he'd forget it ever happened and move onto the next target.

If he had an interest in females, which would be weird, he'd probably sneak in and watch them silently. Though if he was caught he'd most likely kill them due to them being terrified of him. And if they were killed, all of his time observing them would be wasted.

He'd ask the female questions, because no one ever taught him anything about sex nor the female anatomy. If he touched a corpse, he wouldn't learn anything at all. Other than body parts. He wouldn't get a reaction from a dead female. A female would never be attracted to him, while he could rape them, he would always be too scared because he's never done anything sexual in his life. Or at least felt a female that wouldn't reject him and let him explore her body without them getting scared or telling him to stop.

He would know his own limitations and speak to no one. And would always retreat if he knew he couldn't complete a mission or task he sought out to do.

He feels nothing killing. He isn't afraid of it nor regrets doing it. Life is a simple thing to him, so he isn't afraid of death himself.

I could go on and on.

Late chapter update, but I hope this stuff is somewhat useful.

The fact people portray him as a sex crazed boy is concerning.