Original Characters
Please watch this if you can. It is quite funny. Secondly, why on Earth have we let this happen?
Okay okay, not all OC's are that bad. But.. We can predict what to expect from them.
1. They are the next proxy and she doesn't know it.
2. She and Jeff will be together
3. She must be special to have been spared.
Yeah yeah, well that's not the point.
People!
Plot your story before you write it!
I mean gosh. No one cares about your pretty drawings, we want Jeff to have a reason to say "Hey, I can't kill this bitch. Damn, just when I got my knife ready."
He won't just stop when he's about to kill you, what is this, some cheesy romance film?
He can't love correctly!
Okay, here may be some reasons as to why the character may be special without any abilities at all.
1. Jeff loves seeing her suffer
2. Jeff wants to have a pet
3. Jeff failed to kill her, thus brought her back for punishment
4. He wants to break her fighting spirit.
Now he may not even want to do this at first, he wants to kill that bitch! He doesn't care about her flawless hair or perfect melons, no! Not her ass or great legs! He would have done the nasty with your corpse afterwards.
"Hell yeah, nothing like killing and raping."
"Jeff, go to your room."
"But!"
"No buts! Go! Clean your room or some shit, you barely escaped Devientart last time. "
"Gosh, I want to be a part of the community!"
"Are you sure about that?"
"Well fuck this!"
Jeff runs into the next room.
"That's what I thought."
Oops.
Sorry about that! We kind of have an.. Agreement. We are tired of seeing the same bullshit online. #FixJeff!
Anyways..
Here are reasons he would share you if you did possess any abilities.
1. Slenderman wants you as his proxy, which will take a long time to master
2. Well... Nothing else really.
If your OC is the next proxy, let her fit the role. Don't let it just be killing Zalgo and saving the world. The Creepypasta's could give a heck about the world that turned on them. Make sure it makes sense.
Bad Examples of an OC:
Amber
5'4
She has the power to teleport and has cat ears, claims to be the daughter of Slenderman.
She is bisexual
And HATES Jeff.
Stop.
Good examples:
Mal
16
Very fast but reckless, tends to overthink in bad situations but can kill easily.
Her only weakness is when she is hit in her legs; when she can't run.
It's not the best, but it's better than these shitty neko OC's I mean really, is Slenderman into cats? I guess that's where he gets his pussy from.
Anyway!
Make sure your OC is not a Marysue.
She is still human, she has weakness's and can die.
They have to have something to be remembered by, like Ticci Tobby. I mean it's in his name.
Don't make a long name, please.. I may be guilty of it but compared to all of this other shiz online it's better.
Anything that ends in "the killer" has lost it's umph.
"You call?"
"Dammit Jeff! I warned you!"
"No!"
Jeff: "You're a monster!"
Jeff again runs away.
"That's it, run from your problems!"
"Oh, you're still here."
Sorry!
Okay, one last piece of advice.
I know you want to make a good OC, but trust me, focus on the story first. Then you can draw all of the art you want, but make it realistic. Don't make it to where the victims can pick your OC out on the street. Keep hair color natural and not all OC's have to be emotional. I mean that does get kind of old.
Well.. I have to go bleach my eyes really fast, I am sure Jeff beat me to it already.
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