These will be marked:
Up to 5 points for content and plot
Up to 3 points for technical skill and writing
Up to 2 points for accuracy

1.MrsDavidTennant23
4/5 amazing story, next time try and have more of a plot.
3/3 really well written
1/2 a few grammar and spelling mistakes.
8/10

2.enderblaze42_meap- has an extension
3.donnanoble1234
5/5 amazing plot.
3/3 really well written
2/2 no noticeable mistakes
10/10
4.pianissississimo
3/5-good plot but not very original
3/3-loved how it was written.
2/2-I didn't notice any mistakes.
8/10
5. TheTardis95
4/5- good plot idea.
2/3- well written
2/2- I didn't notice any mistakes
6. TheTenthDoctor01
Unsubmitted
7. TheUnusualAuthor
has an extension
8.thoscheifangirl1234
has an extension
9. Writinggeekly-
5/5 Amazing storyline, and I loved the indirect inclusion of my OC.
3/3 Really skillful writing.
1/2 a few technical mistakes in spellings, nothing major.
9/10

10. protector-Joy
Unsubmitted
11. sandshoesgrandpa
Unsubmitted

12. wholigans
Unsubmitted
13.JediTimelady
Unsubmitted
14.FangirliestFangirl
4/5-love the idea of remembering and forgetting again
3/3-very well written and also sad.
2/2 no noticeable mistakes

People who didn't submit or request an extension.
TheTenthDoctor01
protector-Joy
sandshoesandgrandpa
wholigans
JediTimelady
Disappointing. At least one of you is going out. It's not wholigans as she got a bonus point for the cover, so she has 1 point, not zero.
You better tell me why you didn't post (or if you did and I missed it) because tomorrow night I'm picking one of your names out of a hat to find this round's elimination.
So, it's between
TheTenthDoctor01
protector-Joy
sandshoesandgrandpa
And
JediTimelady