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Review:

Title: 4.5/5
The title is looking perfect for this one shot. It's unique and as it's written in french, so it's catching even more attention and good that you have written it's meaning in the blurb.

Cover: 5/5
I loved the cover. The colour theme and the fonts, everything is looking so attractive.

Book description: 3/5
First of all remove that "birthday special" from it. It's a book description, so no need of writing that there. Then the blurb was interesting but at the same point it had a lot of grammatical mistakes. Edit them. There was one line which went like 'Neither they can backout from this marriage nor they can live with each other.' After reading this line I felt like they were forced to have a contract but I was a bit disappointed. They had a choice so better phrase it like 'Neither they wanted to back out from this marriage nor they wanted to live with each other. It would look better.

Prologue: 0/5
There was no prologue. I understand that it was just an OS but still a short prologue is needed which can tell the readers where the story is starting from. Otherwise you are more likely to rush the story.

Grammar: 2/10
There were a lot of mistakes. I have one confusion. Was her name 'Bella' or 'Bela' because I guess it was a BeHir fan-fic and the name should be 'Bela'. At a few places you used 'Bela' and at other places it was 'Bella'. At many places the 'names' and the words in the starting of the sentences are in small letters. Make them in capital. The tenses weren't used correctly. Also, the thoughts and dialogues, both were written in double inverted commas. So, to make it easier to read I would suggest you to write thoughts in single inverted commas and the dialogues in double inverted commas or vice versa. Another thing, if you are writing a POV then no need to write 'I thought' because that's what POV's are for.

Plot: 7.5/10
The plot was something unique but at the same time it seemed a bit cliché. Like the relationship contract was something new but if we see it overall then no doubt, it was a cliché. Like many a times marriages break but the couple continue living together just
because of this fear of 'what the society will say'. You just added a contract into it and good that you didn't deviate from the plot and sticked to it.

Flow of the story: 4/5
Flow was going fine but at one point I felt it rushed when Bella met Mahir and asked to choose between to kill or betray. It could have been shaped up in a better way and could be more descriptive because it was one of the turning point in their lives.

Creativity: 4/5
As I said that it was somewhat a cliché plot but then you added up your creative mind into it by adding up the contract. Also, the whole idea that how Mahir became a father without even betraying her was a nice thing. I liked that idea.

Your interest based on the content: 4.5/5
The blurb, cover and title, all these things caught my interest first. Then the story had a lot of coins to turn which made it interesting and after every paragraph this question came in mind 'what will happen next?' which is a very good thing because you were able to maintain that curiosity till the end.

Overall opinion: 8.5/10
Overall, it was a nice read with so many confusions and all and a topic which many of us would have seen happening somewhere 'betray'. Nice concept. Just work on the grammar part and make the POV'S and the flashback a bit clearer.

Total: 43/65

Title
Not actually needed but a small alternative since your title is still a bit common: Pact of relations

Blurb
"I am pregnant Mahir?"
"You cheated on me!"
"I didn't. I can explain is."
×××××××
"You already have a son?! "
"Don't you want to know whose child it is?"
"You betrayed me."
"I did not. This mistrust will ruin us!"
××××××××
"I can't live with a betrayer like you. I can't let you live your life either. I WANT A RELATIONSHIP CONTRACT."
"I won't let you do that?"
"You don't have a choice either."
××××××××
"Divorce?"
"What will others say? We are the definition of a perfect couple."
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Betrayal - A simple word, which can ruin many lives. Nobody thinks about it while doing it but the regret is present forever.

Mistrust - The only thing which can ruin the whole world and every species in the world, starting from humans. A world without this word could be so sweet, filled with love.

Contract - A very necessary invention in the world, mostly in the business world. Nowadays humans use it for their benefits in relationships.

Divorce - The sole word which can ruin a whole family and drift them away forever.

What happens when Bela and Mahir are confronted with all of it?
What if the perfect couple needs to think about divorce?
What if both are incapable to think wisely upon the betrayal and mistrust they faced?
What if their ego starts to take over their love?

To know their story, jump in the story providing you with an amazing ride of emotions and reality.

Prologue
"Earlier weapons used to kill people, now humans themselves became weapons. Anyone is capable to enter our lives and leave us after betraying us. Just because betraying someone isn't a crime, doesn't mean that it doesn't hurt a person. Betrayals are even worse than weapons. One gunshot and a person is more likely to die. Betrayals make you die each second. I wish that the government starts punishing those who betray someone, same as they punish a person who kills a human…" she said with a blank face which couldn't even portray feelings anymore.

" I did not betray you! " he interrupts her. "Things evolved in an ugly way. I wish that in future scientists invent a lie detector so that I can prove my innocence to you. And don't worry, mistrust is equally devastating as a betrayal is. Both kill a person."

"I don't want this marriage to be broken. But my hate is too much for leaving you just like this and let you enjoy your life."

"What do you want?" Mahir inquired from her.

"A relationship contract! Outside, nobody should know that we are on bad terms. Inside, we won't be considering this relationship. We will be strangers who share a mansion", Bela retorted on his face.

"No. I am never going to agree to this. You are my wife."

"I am the one whom you betrayed. And now, I have the right to decide what our future is going to be!"

"I need to agree if you want the contract", Mahir told her.

"You will, otherwise I will do something beyond your expectations" Bela said determinedly. Showing something in her hand, he knew that he can't escape the condition of his stubborn wife. He agreed to her conditions making their life turn around 180°.

Cover
Not needed.