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Review:
Chapters read: 23/31
Title: 0.5/5
The title doesn't tell anything about the plot. It's not at all unique and this title can go for any common love story which makes it look a simple love story and nothing else. I would suggest you to change the title.

Cover: 3.5/5
The cover is beautiful no doubt but the fonts aren't looking nice on it. The fonts are totally ruining the essence of the cover. Also, at the top there is someone's hand overlapping the picture which isn't looking nice.

Book description: 4.5/5
The blurb is nice. You have given the summary of the plot nicely and I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes over here.

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you to write one. Let it be short but do write that as it gives an overview and the idea how the story is going to be.

Grammar: 1/10
There were A LOT of grammatical errors. Tenses weren't used correctly at many places, words were misspelled and punctuations weren't placed correctly. The writing style was also not uniform. Somewhere you wrote in italics somewhere in normal font. In the initial chapters there were no double inverted commas before and after the dialogues. It was really confusing when the dialogue is starting and when it's ending. I would suggest you to get your whole book edited by a good editing shop.

Plot: 2/10
Plot was a total cliché. Everything was predictable. When you showed that Naina's father takes her to a non vegetarian market to show the hardships after marrying Sameer, I thought that it isn't that cliché but afterwards with all those twists and turns it became a full cliché story. There was nothing new in it.

Character Development: 7/10
I would say that you have showed each character very nicely. They were very realistic. Sameer and Naina no doubt were two opposites. The transformation of Sameer from a simple sweet, sweet and innocent boy to a possessive lover is well described and shown. Naina priotiorized her family the most but then she loved Sameer as well and I liked that you didn't show that she literally left Sameer for her fathers sake but she had a plan in her mind. This showed that she had the courage to fight for her love and prove it right. I liked both the characters and their development.

Flow of the story: 1/5
Flow was very very fast. The interview which happened in the first chapter was too fast. Like Naina just asked him two questions and employed him. Then in just 3 to 4 chapters they started getting attracted towards each other and within 8 to 9 chapters they madly fell for each other. This whole thing which you showed in just 9 chapters could be slow. It felt like a movie is going in front of me which needs to be finished within 2 hours. Edit those chapters and add more things into them so they don't look paced up.

Creativity: 1/5
As I said that the plot was too cliché. I didn't find anything very creative. All those things that you showed in this book, I have seen those things some where or the other happening. The dialogues were the most creative though. I absolutely loved Sameer's dialogues in each chapter.

Your interest based on the content: 1/5 Too be honest, I wouldn't want to read this story because firstly the plot is nothing new and then the pace is too fast. There are many grammatical mistakes and this book is lacking some creativity.

Overall opinion: 4/10
This book is for those who just come to have an escape from the real world and wants to see some good romantic scenes along with heart breaks and some twists and turns. But still there is a lot of work you need to do in your book.

Total: 25.5/75

Title:
Subduing Religions

Blurb:
Not needed!

Prologue:
"You're accepted, Mr Khan. Your words are quite impressive. I hope your work will be equally impressing", Naina said while sitting on the Boss chair.
"Thank you, Ma'am. I will make sure to not disappoint you in any way."
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"Dad you're the best. I am so lucky to have you. Now I understand why Daughters are Father's lifelines."
"I am the best because my baby is the best. Never you managed to disappoint me", Naina's father happily hugs her. A talk between father and daughter results in everything being fine.
"Now stop being so senti. I have only one daughter and she's equal to ten plus equal to my Amma. Not you're lucky to have me. I am lucky to have you", her father added to it.
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"Did you just kiss him, Naina? Did you kiss your employee?" Kabir, Naina's best friend enquired. Naina's whole face faded.
"What did just happen? Did I really kiss him? Will Kabir tell this to dad? Dad trusts me blindly, am I harming his trust?" These were the only thoughts running in her mind. Kabir was simply frustrated over this happening. Were they having feelings for one another? Then what about him and Naina?
××××××××××

" What happened last night between us?" Her voice was shaking and her eyes were only on him.
"Naina, I am sorry. I tried to keep us apart but…" His words were left incomplete since Naina's mind was away already. They crossed limits. In which way is she going to face her father? How disappointed he would be through all of it.
"How could you Sameer? You took disadvantage of my drunk state", Naina just started to shout on him. It went on till they parted ways to leave.
××××××××××

"I love you."
"I love you too Naina. I can't live without you", he responded to her. Two persons saw this from far and anger grew in them.
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"I need dowry Naina. Otherwise, I can't marry you", he firmly stated shocking her to the core.
"In today's time, you're asking of dowry. You should be ashamed of yourself, Sameer!" She decided to leave on the instant when a voice stopped her from the back.
"I want your happiness in dowry." She turned back and looked at him in surprise. That moment she realized that her decision was correct. Sameer is the one for her.
××××××××××

"Your father got a heart attack, Ms Naina. Take care and don't give him any kind of stress!" The doctor goes leaving a shattered Naina who took small steps to reach inside.
"Papa, are you fine?" At that moment it felt like it was the small Naina who came to enquire about her ill father. Then be it her expression or her way to ask.
"Why do you care? Go back to him", anger was present and the retort back was the evidence of the anger.
××××××××××

"Papa, I will do everything you say", an emotionless Naina says to him. At the moment she was ready to do everything for pleasing her father. And everything meant everything.
"Marry Kabir!" At that time Naina was hopeless. She wanted to please her father and live with Sameer. But now, she changed her mind to only please her father
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Turns of fate led Sameer and Naina to separate. The cruel decision of her father changed their lives until one day they figure out a big secret which changes their life. Now it was for time to see whether it was too late or they still had a chance to Samaina.

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