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Ranking
Title
Your title is really long and still attractive. A mythology fan probably would be interested in it and a normal ready may skip it. Probably you could remove the "Shailaputri" and just keep "Conqueror of Mountains" as the title. That would be a lot more attractive and the meaning of the title won't change. 

Cover
Your cover totally matches your title and it looks pretty good. However, your title and fonts can't be seen. That should be changed because it ruins the overall look of your cover. 

Blurb 
You tell the overall situation of the story and the important facts. But you failed to make it attractive and unique. It resembles a quite normal love story. Other than that your blurb is too short and it would be better if it would have been a bit longer. 

Overall expression 
I am not a mythology fan so the title this way wouldn't be attractive for me since I can't figure out what it means. Your fonts don't manage to make it attractive to a reader. Your blurb manages to make the story up to a reader but then it's also a bit disappointing. As a reader, this story would probably skip my eyes.

Title
Not needed!

Blurb
"What is Love, Mata?" Little Gauri asked her mother Mainavati.
"Love? Why do you want to know about it?" She asked her little daughter.
"I heard didi talking about love and wanting to marry him!"
"Love, let me think. Love is keeping others before you. It means thinking about others, their wishes, and their happiness. Their sorrows should be like your own", her mother explained to her.
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"Sati", someone called out making the women look backwards. This time Parvati was able to see clearly but her mind went dizzy. That particular woman looked the same as her.
"WHAT?" Parvati jerked up from her dream. She looks around and finds herself in the temple. She was panting heavily after her dream. Parvati stood up and searched that couple all around which helped her. To her dismay, there wasn't any other soul than Parvati. Suddenly her friend called her out and she had to leave that place for going back to the palace where her father called her. Her rudraksha was held tightly in her hand.
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A love story of pure and Devine.
She was a princess who loved everything.
He was a man who didn't love anything.
They united with difficulties but their love was cut short by the game of fate and time which led them to succumb to darkness.

She was a princess.
He was the great mahdev.
She was cursed the moment they met.

Join me to unveil the saga of love.
The unification of Lasya and Tandav.
The love of Mahakal and Gauri.
The birth of Gauri from the death of Sati.
From Anth to Aarambh.
From heartbreak to love.
From Shiv to his priye Sakthi.

Cover

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