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Title
Your title is really attractive. In the whole you have chosen something unique and it displays the genre as well. Any mystery/ Thriller fan would immediately catch your title. I don't think that there's anything that needs to be changed in it.

Cover
Your cover looks nice. At first I thought it was boring with a normal girl and a simple title but then the man appeared in the story giving your cover a suitable shot to the title. However, I think your cover is a bit blurry which doesn't amaze me and the man is a bit hidden at the first sight. Your name on top hides the man a bit as well. I would recommend a new cover for you.

Blurb
You have given a short sneak peak of your story. You mention the situation without telling much about the story but you don't tell some things which could have been informative. Who's master? Something about him that could help the suspense a bit and possibly you could have given a small quote, dialogue or something in the beginning that could be a bit more attractive to the reader. Our of 10, I would have given you 7 points for this blurb.

Overall expression
It's overall really interesting. Some small things could have been covered but other than that everything looks amazing in it. This book would have definitely caught my attention.

Title
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Blurb
"Hey I am David", the newcomer introduced himself to the beautiful girl in front of him.
"Hey, I am Anamika. Are you new here?"
"Yes. Would you mind showing me around this place?"
"Sure. Come with me."
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"He will have to die, Anamika. And that only because…"
"Because he got close to me", Anamika completed his sentence with a numb feeling in her heart.
"Right. You're intelligent!"
"Why are you doing this, Master?"
"You know the answer already!"
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"Where's David, Anamika? I have been searching him all the while", David's younger brother, Alex, enquire, "He hasn't appeared since yesterday!"
"I have to confess something to you."
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"You have only two ways to see him. Either give IT to me or solve my Riddles and find him. If you found him soon enough then congratulations. If not then you will find him dead?"
"How can you do this? He has nothing to do with anything that happened between us", Anamika shouted over the cell phone.
"One mistake can kill him immediately." And the call got declined, marking the journey of mystery and thriller.
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Past appears back at unexpected times. Memories of that past are present always. Memories can be positive or negative but when they come back, they bring emotions with them. That's what happened with Anamika. Her ugly past came back when she was running away from it.

Now her past was threatening her friend's life and she only had two ways to save him. Either she gives him that precious thing or she solves the Riddles.

What will they choose?
What does Master want from her and who is he actually?
What's Master and Anamika's connection?
Will Anamika and Alex be able to save David from him?
Will the way be a bed of roses or a path of thorns?

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