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Review:
Chapters read: 18/18
Title: 2/5
The title is very common. There are so many books with the same title. Try going with the synonym of this word maybe. Also, the story is more than revenge. So try going with a title which covers up everything in just a word or two.

Cover: 2/5
The cover is not very catchy. The fonts aren't looking nice. Also it seems very empty. The white borders at the corners aren't giving a nice look to it.

Book description: 0.5/5
The book description is not going with the story. If we just read the text, then the description is nice but after reading the book I felt that it isn't telling much about the plot. You kind of just provided a character sketch of Subhadra and Arjuna instead of telling the summary. The whole blurb needs to be re-written which will give a hint to the readers about what is awaiting for them in the story.

Prologue: 5/5
I found the prologue perfect. You very well showed the bond Subhadra and Sudama shared and how did the feeling of revenge overpowered Subhadra. The feeling were very well described. Overall, a great job done over here.

Grammar: 9.5/10
You have got a really rich vocab. Every word was so cautiously used and I didn't find any grammatical mistake except a few minor ones which do happen. I don't think so I
have much to say over here.

Plot: 5/10
I guess you tried to pick the theme 'revenge' but the story wasn't revolving around that. Many a times you got deviated from the actual plot. Till now I found everything but not
revenge. You have showed nicely how even without knowing each other's identity, they fell in love with each other and now I am excited to know what will happen when their identities will be revealed and how the story would proceed. You have even showed the friendship bond very beautifully.

Character Development: 6/10
The characters have been shaped up very nicely. How Subhadra turned so bitter and how there was just one feeling overpowering 'revenge' but then I also didn't understand why didn't she believe in love? I didn't understand Arjun's character much till now as this thought revolves in my mind 'did he really killed Sudama' and 'why' but then he seems so nice. You showed a bond between two contrasting characters, Vrushali and
Subhadra. They both were opposites, one believed in love and other in hate, but still they became friends. Also, I loved Subhadra's character development. She was a non-believer of love but then she was supporting her friend for it and was even
sacrificing herself. She even fell in love and accepted it. I am waiting for Arjun's story to get revealed now.

Flow of the story: 5/5
The flow is going perfect. Neither too fast nor too slow. You aren't stretching anything. Go with this flow only.

Creativity: 3.5/5
Your words were the most creative. I loved that chapter when Vrushali was explaining Subhadra to give the feeling of hate and revenge and embrace love. You showed both
of their points so perfectly that they both seemed right at their position. Also, the mantra that Subhadra had. The story is not very clichรฉ and that's one of the best part of it.

Your interest based on the content: 4.5/5
The story is going very interesting for now. There are so many questions running through my mind right now. Also, you have the left the story at such a point where the curiosity level is the highest. In each chapter there is some mystery, there is something
which forces me to read further.

Overall opinion: 7/10
Overall, I didn't regret reading it at all. I was enjoying it. From Vrushali and Subhadra's bond to Arjun and Vrikarsh everything was intriguing. You have used your words
preciously and go on with that.

Total: 50/75

Title:
Vengeance prefers love

Blurb:
A death? That's something very natural. Many face death in their family, some in their childhood and some in their adulthood. But each death has an equal impact, whether close or distant relatives. It doesn't only bring tears to your eyes or make you shout for their loss. They can evoke more feelings which you can't handle by yourself. At that moment you search reasons for their death or rather you find humans who are the reason for their death.

That's what happened with Subhadra when someone close to her died. For her and her family, it could have only been one person, Arjuna. Memories arrived and the hate grew. Love became non-existent in her life. Swearing revenge and appearing there was the motive of her. But then another feeling appeared between them.

Another feeling started to overpower her hate, the motivation of vengeance. Moreover, it happened with the person she hated the most. That day she had to take the right decision. Would she take the higher virtue and forgive him? Or will she reprimand him for his share in her life? Will she achieve her goal of vengeance or will she let love being on the top of all the other emotions?

And what if someone else falls for her? She swore revenge in front of her whole kingdom. What if they did not support Subhadra in her decision? What if she has to go alone on the path of her decision? What if her loved ones started to hate her for her decision? What will happen after all her feelings turn numb and her mind starts to rule her whole body?

Prologue:
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Cover:

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