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Review
Chapters read: 28/28
Title: 3.5/5
At first I didn't get this title because I didn't know the meaning of 'Panchali' which gave me a not-so-good impression but later after reading the book, I felt that this title goes
well with your story and suits it but still I would suggest you to at least give it's translation in the blurb. Also, I feel it should be 'Pandavas' and not 'Pandav' because they are 5 and you are not talking about a single man.

Cover: 2/5
The cover at first glance looks nice but then it has some problems in it. Firstly the girl who is there in the cover doesn't look like she is in the background, so the manipulation
is not good. The fonts need to be changed as their colour is not nice and isn't much visible.

Book description: 3.5/5
The line which is at the top saying 'behind Panchali's success is her Pandavas' makes it feel like Panchali was on some mission or had some goal which the Pandavas helped in
fulfilling but in actual there was no major success of Panchali. So, I would suggest you remove that line. Apart from that, the blurb is quite good.

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you write one as it tells the reader how the story is going to proceed.

Grammar: 4/10
There were too many spelling mistakes. I guess that was because of auto correct but better you edit them. Then the main problem was punctuations. You hardly placed
commas anywhere and at some places you forgot to place double inverted commas before starting with the dialogues because of which I had to read some sentences twice to understand their meaning. The tenses were also not correctly used at some places.

Plot: 6/10
The plot was good. Actually, I am the one who never supports Draupadi marrying 5 men and sharing her love and not a Mahabharata fan too but still if I see from a general perception, then you took it quite nicely. You showed the emotions of each and everyone which was the base of your story. You tried giving a new angle to look through to the people and you did a pretty good job over there though I feel a few things were
off.

Character's development: 8/10
Your characters were developing nicely. I liked the way you showed Draupadi overcoming her insecurity and feeling attracted to them. Bheem and Nakul's character was also nice but I didn't find much development in Yudhishthir and Arjun's character.
They need to be looked more upon.

Flow of the story: 3/5
The flow was going a bit slow initially but then it was going fine. Some chapters were really very boring but then you made the next chapter interesting.

Creativity: 3/5
Creativity at the ending chapters was the most during their wedding. You showed five different weddings in different ways. I liked that a lot. None was the same and boring and that was the best part of the whole book.

Your interest based on the content: 2.5/5
As I said, some chapters were really very boring but then you used to make the next chapter interesting. I got a neutral feeling while reading it.

Overall opinion: 6.5/10
Edit this book once, change the cover and add a prologue to it. Overall, it's good for a one-time read.
Total: 42/75

Title
Keep it only Pandavas ki Priya Panchali and remove the other things behind it.

Blurb
6 they were incarnated on earth to bring about goodness and to rule the world.

6 different humans.
6 different feelings.
6 different ideologies.
6 different perspectives.
1 goal, 1 destiny, DHARMA.
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When time turned and fate played its wishes on them, they were brought together through the saying of a caring mother.

Would dharma suffice to unite them together or would it levy another test to bring together another heartbreaking gloom?

Would they accept their destiny or perish before doing so?

Will the son of Devas and daughter of fire stand together, forever?

Life turned and love bloomed by raising heartbeats and blushing cheeks.

Would the question be "Who was the most loved?" or jealousy had no place between the six?
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A story of love where values ruled and greed never appeared.
A story of the sacrifice of the mighty yagyaseni and her patis.
Though criticised unchaste, their love was the purest, this book stands a testimony for the very same.

The story of the unusual marriage between 6. A story of respect, dharma, kindness and above all LOVE. The story of the five Pandavas and their wife Panchali.

Join me in the path to find the practical emotions of the 6 when they together develop a feeling of happiness and love.

{First book of the Pandavapriya Series}

Prologue
"Rajkumari I am a mere Brahmana. I can't give you a life of luxury and pomp. I can't give you a life that your father has, but I do promise to keep you happy and my arrow would not wait for a second to pierce the man who dared to cause a tear to flow down from your eyes", Arjun sincerely confessed to her.
"I don't need a life of luxury but of love. Not of valour but of virtues. I don't know why but holding hands with you today, I feel a kind of bliss that I have never felt with anyone before and that hut would become the reason of our happiness, not a royal mansion Rajkumar Arjun."
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Arjun saw his Mata smiling serenely with her eyes closed before saying the words that would shatter their hearts and shake them completely.
"I have always taught you, my dear boys, that you should always share what you have. Share it amongst yourselves whatever Arjun had brought. "
Draupadi's hands moved from his hands and a look of horror appeared her beautiful face as she looked at him with disbelief.
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Draupadi thought with all her might about her Parth as if her life depended on those eyes but actually, it did. Suddenly the eye colour changed to the black of Rajkumar Bheem but it had the same love that Arjun had it in and surprisingly she didn't feel sad or hurt. Her heart skipped a beat when the picture changed to that of Rajkumar Nakul, Rajkumar Sahdev and then Rajkumar Yudhishthir. Everyone looking at her with love as she opened her eyes in shock.
"Do they love me Sakha", Draupadi questioned
"More than their life Sakhi that is why they decided to go for Sanyas for your happiness Sakhi even if it meant losing their love," he replied to her and then he continued, "Sakhi this marriage is needed for the establishment of righteousness and the defeat of evil at your hands. The Pandavas will be your guide Sakhi they maybe five for others but actually they are one, established to sow seeds of righteousness which you will nurture and protect."
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"Mental strength is much more important than physical strength, Dhananjay's heart is filled with sorrow and guilt. Sakhi, he believes that he has spoiled the life of the only woman he loved."
"What do you mean Govind, who is that woman?" Her eyes were almost burning with fury thinking of her Parth with someone else, a small smile formed on His face as he came closer to his Sakhi and kept his hand on his shoulder and told
"You are the women, dear Sakhi."
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"Maharaj, Rajkumar Arjun has gone to Indralok to fight Alumbusha", a spy told.
"Alumbusha, the asur who has mastered black magic who targets one's greatest sorrow and guilt against him", said drishtadyumn.
Panchali's heartbeat stopped for a moment as she turned to find Govind. He nodded sadly. Parth was already in so much guilt, the dark magic added to it would make the situation worse she thought, as she ran to Ved Vyas.
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Is it so easy to love 5 people at once? Mostly when the owner of your heart has broken it?
Is it so easy to forget the words of people and dwell upon a life of happiness?
Is it so easy to love someone just because you are married to them?
Is it so easy to forgive someone who was ready to sacrifice his love for his family?

He thought about himself while asking her to leave him and she had no choice than marrying his brothers to get him. This story intends to present the feelings of these 5 after their marriage.

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