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Review:
Chapters read: 36/36
Title: 4/5
The title goes with your story perfectly. I don't find the need to change it as this title describes the plot of your story.

Cover: 4/5
I liked the cover a lot. The vectors on it are amazing and especially the guitars which are there on it's background. I just didn't like the font of your subtitle. Maybe you can try changing it.

Book Description: 5/5
I loved the blurb. The blurb caught my attention the most. The starting lines described their characters as well as the plot of the story. I didn't even find any grammatical mistakes there. Great job done with the blurb.

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you write one. Let it be short but do write that as it gives an overview and the idea how the story is going to proceed.

Grammar: 5/10
There were a lot of grammatical errors. At a few places, the words were also misspelled. At some places you didn't change the former names. I would suggest, you edit the whole book.

Plot: 6/10
The plot was nice. Though it was a love triangle but good that you didn't make it as a cliché love triangle where the third person becomes a villain. There was a plothole that I found. You said that Avinash went to London at the age of 10 then how come they had a reunion of their batch in the further chapters? I can understand Priya and Naisha but I didn't get how Avinash was also included in the reunion. Maybe you can just show that it was a reunion for Naisha and Priya but they both didn't want to leave Avinash alone and so they took him along with them. Otherwise you had planned everything well.

Character Development: 7/10
I loved all the characters. They all were different personalities and had different thoughts about love and you summed them up well. I like the character of Naisha the most. She was a crazy, kiddish and immature girl but then she became an understanding, loving and mature girl. I loved this development. Also how Avinash who didn't believe in love and hated music fell in love and started singing also. New hopes entered his life. I loved it. But I couldn't see much development in Priya's character. I found her the same sensible, loving and selfless girl in all the chapters.

Flow of the story: 3.5/5
The flow of the story was smooth but at one place I felt that you made it a bit rushed. When Avinash apologized to Naisha about his rude behaviour, you just ended it in one quick phone call. That part can be made even better. You can describe their feeling over there instead of being done with a 'sorry'. Otherwise, the flow was going the way it should; neither too fast nor too slow.

Creativity: 2.5/5
The different definitions of love; which is your plot is the most creative thing. The third person not being a villain in the story was the best thing I liked about it. It was very realistic and realistic things are very tough to find in stories these days. Also, I noticed that these three were good in different non-scholastic activities. Though it could be even more creative is what I feel.

Your interest based on the story: 4.5/5
I liked this story a lot. I didn't get bored even once while reading it. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Overall opinion: 9.5/10
I feel that you get this book edited once by some good editing shop and it would be perfect. This is a sweet story with some mysteries in it and it surely keeps hooked till the
end.
Total: 51/75

Title:
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Blurb:
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Prologue:
"She won't tell, but I am saying it to you. Don't call Priya a chatterbox", the small Avinash told to Naisha.
"Avi, she's my Bestie. I will call her whatever I want to. Don't you dare to interfere between us!" Naisha was his friend too but girls remain girls. Isn't it? And coming between two female friends as a male friend can only mean danger. Avi's tongue was caught after her warning.
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"Oye Naishu, don't you dare to forget me", the ten-year-old boy warned her.
"I won't Avi! Why will I forget my best friend?" Naisha and Avi didn't notice Priya standing a bit far from them and listening to their conversation.
"Listen, promise me you will always stay in contact with me. We will always email each other once in a month", Avinash told her.
"Promise!" At that moment she promised him to forget her own promise after months which may lead to a big misunderstanding in the future.
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"Fault in our stars, really Priya?" Avinash said while seeing the cover of the book.
"I knew you wouldn't like it."
"Why shouldn't I like it?"
"Because it's a book about how selfless and how beautiful love is. Mostly boys don't like it", Priya explained to him.
"Girl, I am not like random boys. I am the Avinash Mehra who is one of a kind. And I know the power and value of love." But did he really? His heart clearly knew that Avinash was lying to not hurt Priya. He and love were two parallels. He did everything to make his family happy. He left his dream, his wishes and his happiness behind for it. Then even love had no importance for him anymore. And the second reason to hate love was yet not counted in it.
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"I left singing for her. But I wish only if she would be here by my side. Smiling like always. Playing with her curly hair strains. I miss you Mih- NO I can't call her that. I wish I could, but I lost that right. I hope she's happy wherever she is at the moment. If that moment wouldn't exist then wouldn't you be here by my side?" Avinash wished to have her but he also knows that destiny had been cruel to them. They should be together like always and they are separated forever.
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"Which new blunder have you done now, Naishu?" Priya asked her simply. Being Naisha's soul sister she was already habituated to her blunders.
"I did nothing. I only proposed Avi and got rejected by him. Then I again called him for a candlelight dinner and got scolded by him. That's not my fault, is it?" Naisha was being the most casual person on earth but Priya got stuck on her first words only.
"He rejected you?" Naisha nods and then some words follow which shock Priya even more.
"Apparently he hates the feeling of love. Will you help me to manofy him and get him back? You know that I can't take rejections." There stood Priya in front of the biggest decision anyone could ask her to make. Being selfish or selfless? Her soul sister or she? Would it be a normal dressing material, it wouldn't matter but it was HIM. The person both admired.
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Friendship is a precious gem which everyone can hold or drop. And the friends which we make in our childhood, have a very special place in our heart. As soon we grow up, separation needs to happen and that also happened with Avinash Bannerjee, Priya Sharma and Naisha Joshi. Over time they managed to hold upon that friendship. Their feelings for another started to grow more than just "friends".

In childhood, it's pretty casual to have a friend of the opposite gender. In adult life, this casual this isn't that normal. Friendship grows to deeper feelings and can also end with love rather than attraction. No sooner said than done! Naisha and Priya evolved feelings for Avinash. And he? Love didn't exist in his life. This feeling was a term which he hated.

A misunderstanding, different feelings, a love triangle, hate, love and unexpected turns of things followed by emotions touching your heart. Suspense and mystery. Hate and love. Friends and family. And in between all of this, Avinash, Priya and Naisha on a journey to gather their lives, getting things in their hand.

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