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Ranking

Title
Fix my broken heart, mend my broken heart, me and my broken heart, fixing my broken heart, you fixed my broken heart or my broken heart; all these titles are nice to be skipped. Endless books have this title and therefore I don't know why I would go and tap on this precise book with a title like X others. You should consider another title which is more attractive and unique than this one. Moreover, don't add an emoticon in that title. It's simply not necessary and it makes a totally amazing title look off guard.

Cover
Your cover is absolutely amazing. There's nothing I could add more to this. Amazing job is done by the graphic designer at this place. From the pictures till the quote, everything is incredible. 

Blurb 
Your blurb isn't that attractive in my opinion. You tell a common situation with many grammatical mistakes. The long sentence is very difficult to read due to the grammar. I don't understand what the connection is between him betraying her and her getting raped. I can't figure out at which time the story is going to proceed. You tell a situation and that situation could have been elaborated even more. 

Overall impression 
The book can easily escape the eye due to the common stuff to be seen in it. The cover is the only catchy thing at this place. You should work on all of it. Try making the title and blurb more catchy for the reader. That would at least make them take the first step to the inside of the book.

Title
Repressing Reminiscence

Blurb
"How is he, Naina?"
"He has a hole in his heart. He needs to go through open-heart surgery. Otherwise, there aren't any survival chances."
"Will he be fine, doctor?"
"Yes, he will be. You shouldn't worry about it", she assured his friends.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"We're going to marry in Udaipur. Isn't it fantastic?" Happiness and only happiness was present at his end.
"No. We… We can't. Not that place!"
"What? But why? Don't you want to have a destination wedding?"
"I do. But not Udaipur. It will revive all bad memories. Please."
"What happened there?"
"It all started five years back…"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I want to break up with you!" he said.
"What? But why? Did I do something wrong? Wait, are you pranking me?"
"I am serious! I am not interested anymore in you."
"You just freaking used me."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Nooo. Leave me…."
×××××××××××××××
Naina Aggarwal, a young, successful doctor.
Sameer Maheshwari, a rich and well-known businessman.

Two persons decided their own life by their whole will but destiny came in between their decision.
What will happen when destiny plays an unfortunate role in her life?
What if one wrong decision decides their life?
What if they find back to each other to let destiny come back?
What would happen if their life is forced to change for bad rather than good?
Whose marriage was going to happen?
What happened five years ago?
Who distrusted whom?

So many questions are there and the only solution is the story with twists to take you on a long ride of emotions, love, hate, separation and togetherness.

Cover

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