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Review:
Chapters read: 4/4
Title: 1/5
Not sure if the title goes with the story or not because for now, there are just 4 chapters but the title didn't catch my attention at all. I didn't feel like reading the book after reading the title so it would be good if you change it.

Cover: 0.5/5
The cover is not at all attractive or beautiful. The manipulation is really bad and the fonts aren't doing any good to it. Moreover, there is no author's name on the cover. I would suggest you get a nice cover from a graphic shop.

Book description: 0.5/5
The book description was actually nothing Because if I see it clearly then it looks more like a character sketch to me than a description. After reading it, I didn't get to know anything about the book.

Prologue: 1/5
The prologue wasn't impressive and it had basically some scenes from the book only. It didn't look like a prologue to me to be honest.

Grammar: 1/10
The grammar wasn't good. There were too many spelling mistakes and tenses were wrong at many places. Punctuations weren't placed correctly and writing style wasn't helping.

Plot: 5/10
To be honest, I didn't understand the plot much as it's just 4 chapters and your blurb didn't help in any way so better would be I don't speak about that. Maybe once you'll update more chapters, then the plot will be clear to me.

Flow of the story: 3.5/5
The flow is a bit slow. Maybe you can combine the first and second chapter and it would
look fine.

Creativity: 0.5/5
Not much for now. I feel you could make SamAina's meet creative but you chose to make it a cliché.

Your interest based on the content: 2/5
The book is fine. I actually don't know what to say over here because I didn't feel much attracted to the book.

Overall opinion: 3/10
Work on it. Edit the whole book and come up with more creative things.

Total: 18/65

Title:
Chasing freedom to love

Blurb:
Everyone deserves freedom but what if that freedom is snatched from you in each way? In the man dominant world, the freedom is snatched from a man itself?

Funny much, isn't it? For Sameer Maheshwari, it's not. Living to need on one person's tunes for your whole life is irritating. Being underestimated all the time sucks. Having someone to control you always makes you feel frustrated but no use of it. All he can do is sitting and listening to the commands of someone else for his life.

26 years old, unmarried, caged, in void of love, searching for the love of his life and an escape from his life. This describes Sameer Maheshwari perfectly in each sense.
*****
Coward, frightened, vulnerable? Nope. This is totally the opposite of Naina. Papa's princess and a girl of her words. It's not even possible to command her for a small glass of water. A free bird decides his own life same like Naina. Nobody can even think of caging her.

23 years old, girl of her mind, free, hot, bold, sassy. What more is needed to describe Naina Agarwal?
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2 characters with opposite characters meet but will this Union be allowed by the person controlling Sameer?
What's his role in all of this?
Will the occurring drama affect Samaina?

Join now, a story of love, affection, drama and a struggle to be what you want.

Prologue:
"Wow, dad. Very good, come on, more!" Naina was just cheering her father up who was busy punching the boy. Not long was needed when the boy was fully bleeding on the floor.

"If you ever again saw my daughter with wrong eyes then that day will be your last one!" Anger, danger, warning. His eyes were enough to depict these feelings. Naina timidly slips in her father's side hug and both leave towards his car.

"Dad, can I ask you something?" Both were on the way to home with her father driving the car.
"Since when did you start to ask me?"
"Why do you beat all the boys who approach me?"
"Because you're my princess. And nobody is allowed to see you with wrong eyes. Your husband will be chosen by me only and that too someone capable to speak of for you. Someone who would be ready to kill someone for your sake. Someone who would never let your self-respect be at stake!" On the one side, he had the determination to find the perfect man for his daughter like each father has. On the other side, Sameer was everything opposite of her father's description.

His father wouldn't agree for love marriage.
Her father wouldn't agree for marriage with such a coward.
He had no choice than to be quiet.
She had no will to go against her father.
Two coins may or may not fall for each other but what about the expectations of their respective fathers?

Cover:

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