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Review:
Chapters read: 12/16
Title: 1/5
The title is too long and also it's not at all catching my attention. It's a bit weird as well. I would highly suggest you to change this title.

Cover: 2/5
The fonts on the cover are looking nice but the background is giving a dark feeling. After looking at the cover I felt it was some dark story but in actual it was just a simple love
story. Use covers which depict the mood of your story.

Book description: 1/5
The blurb is not at all attractive. The lines aren't put in a proper order. There is no description about Shivaay in the blurb. There is one line saying 'She has a boyfriend who is her friend and nothing more than that.' This line doesn't make any sense and it was not important even. You can go on without adding this line and I would suggest you to rewrite the whole blurb.

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you to write one. Let it be short but do write that as it gives an overview and the idea how the story is going to be.

Grammar: 1/10
There were so many grammatical mistakes. Tenses weren't used properly at many places. Refrain yourself from using short forms such as btw, ig, etc. The names such as Annika and Shivaay were written in small letters. It's a basic knowledge that you should write the names in capital letters.

Plot: 1/10
The plot was nothing interesting. Looked like a total clichรฉ. I don't know what are the secrets that are there to be revealed but for now I didn't find anything new.

Character Development: 7/10
I loved the characters of your book. Both Shivaay and Annika were realistic and you showed their emotions nicely. They are even developing nicely. In front of others they fight, but in actual they are like friends only who understand each other. A little bit more development is required in the further chapters.

Flow of the story: 1/5
The flow isn't smooth. In the start it was going so slowly, then in mid you paced up. The recent updates are going smoothly. Maintain that flow. Some chapters are so small. I would suggest you to merge two chapters in to one.

Creativity: 0.5/5
Not much creative. I felt at places that you were lacking ideas and that's why you were just stretching the scene unnecessarily or ending it up fast.

Your interest based on the content: 0.5/5
I was not at all interested while reading it. It was clichรฉd and then grammar wasn't good. Also, the story didn't have a smooth flow and the blurb and title also failed to catch my
attention.

Overall opinion: 1/10
I would say that increase the length of your chapters. Describe things more and be a little creative with things. No one likes to read the same things. A writer needs to be creative with at least their words. Edit up the whole book and a lot of work needs to be
done on it.
Total: 16/75

Title:
Frenemy Companions

Blurb:
Love comes in different ways. Love can grow after an arranged marriage. Love can be limited to a physical relationship. Love can be something which exists but you can't figure out. Love can exist between friends who don't realize it. Sometimes live can also exist in between frenemies, friends who aren't less than enemies. And all of it connects with an illusion.

An illusion which doesn't let you know what is love for you. Is it attraction or lust? Is it real or fake? Does love exist or your mind played with your heart?

This illusion can make your real love far from you and a fake attraction become your everything. Once that illusion of your mind gets cleared by your heart, it is too late to get back.

That's what happened with Annika. Her friend became her boyfriend because that illusion and her friends convinced it to be love. But both of their hearts knew that they are just friends. At the other side, Annika pushed that person away whom her heart desired to be her love by tagging him as a friend.

The confusion became right when Tanya Kapoor entered their life and fell for Annika's boyfriend. His attraction and her love were seen by Annika who got the mission to hook them up together.

For herself, Annika hadn't planned anything but what about destiny? Because destiny loves it when a plan comes together and it can go on to ruin it.

What will happen when the plan gets succeeded?
Will Annika eventually get feelings for the friend who had the tag of her boyfriend?
What will happen to her real love?
Will she realize it or they will just remain Frenemy Companions?
How is Shivaay connected with Annika and will Shivika happen?

A story connecting a lot of emotions and friendships is presented to you in the following. Hop in to enjoy a ride of different people connected to love.

Prologue:
"Oberoi family is moving away Annika."
"But why Mumma?"
"They have too."
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"Annika is coming back on Monday", her brother spoke out loud.
"That's amazing. It's been long since I met Ms Paanika!"
"Yeah and then you both will start fighting like always", his brother said by remembering old days.
"And end up in caring for each other", added his mother.
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"Here we go with the ever so clumsy, Paanika. You didn't even change after 7 years."
"And you're still the same spoilt brat, like before 7 years, Billu Ji!"
"Oh come on, Annika. I ain't a brat. Get your brain repaired", he retorted to her. Again their sweet fights began. Friends from hearts and enemies by the brain. Frenemy Companions was the right way to describe them.
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"Professor Mitra was quite interested in flirting with you", Om reminded him of the day.
"Yeah, the great Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi must have a great female following after all. Tell something new."
"Yeah, and the great Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi can't get himself a girlfriend", Annika replied to him, "Om, give me the number of that professor. Let me hook up Mr Saadu!"
"Please not her. That experience was horrible enough. I don't know how I could spend my life with her", Shivaay literally whined.
"I know another girl. She's like an amazing girl and for sure you will love her. Let me call Tanya."
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"Meet him. He's my boyfriend." Annika stood there with a handsome man in front of Shivaay. Jealousy appeared automatically seeing their hands entangled but he was helpless to say anything. Why should he? Weren't they JUST FRIENDS? Or rather enemies?
"Nice meeting you, Mr Teneja!"
"OH, it's Sameer actually."
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"So how did Sameer propose you?" Her Bhabhi enquired.
"Propose? There was no proposal."
"What?" Literally, nobody in the room stayed back to gasp on this piece of information.
"Then how are you both a couple?" Rudra asked her.
"It was simply a mutual feeling. There was nothing more to that. Moreover, we both were quite compatible with each other."
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"What about love?"
"I don't want to love. Love and marriage mean that you have to listen to your heart. The heart connects with pain. I will never listen to my heart and I will escape the pain of love!" Her statement was firm enough to show her determination.
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"Love is just a deal. You love someone whom you expect to love you back. It's a mutual benefit", Shivaay stated. "Loving someone without expectations shouldn't affect you as well. Because even if they don't love you then your love should be enough for both of you."
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In between Shivaay and Sameer, there was Annika. Different opinions of love were defined by them and they acted according to their thoughts. Now it was up to destiny to pair them up. To make them realize the right definition of love and to make them together with their soul mates. How that would happen, is up to their behaviour, their decisions and their destiny.

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